Well, now you can't hate me. Because I am most certainly favoriting this story, decent review or not (and for me, this is not. Sorry). Enjoyed it much! Quite well done! Take care! God bless!

-TheOne

That was great! I really like Superboy/Robin brotherly fics. ;)
And I also hate it when people follow/favorite my stories but don't review them.

Really good. Loved the bonding btween the Supes. Please make more!

I would like to read what happens after this story.

Really enjoyed the story!

Luther is such a punk!

...I do wish Robin and SuperBoy could've seen eachother after they both got better, but nya. I liked the way Superman handled things. Everything was good.

I usually do review...long ones...but I almost didn't for this fic because its late and I'm tired...but then I saw ur comment at the bottom and realized I too hate it when fics are favorited but not reviewed...so here I am...half asleep...reviewing ur amazing fic...

Well...did I mention its amazing? Ur great at action scenes! I felt like I was there watching the fight. I liked the robin and sb wump of course. Also the superboy and superman bonding was subtle amd well done. I also loved the ending. Simple and sweet. And batman saying whelmed...awesome! That is the best word ever...I gota start using it more...

There's my longish review as promissed. Not I should catch some zzzs. Write on dude!

Best long one-shot ever Jimmy :D

You wrote this while you were sick?! *does a double-take* WOW. XD

Lol. Is it bad that I was just about to favorite this story and not post a review before I read your author's note? :) I really enjoyed this story. Great action, believable plot and character reactions, and overall fabulous story! Robin is my favorite character, so this definitely is going to be added to my collection of young justice favorites. I'd love to read more like this!

loved this, Mala, recommended it in her In Blackest Night story. Glad I read it.

This story is one of my Young Justice favourites (I actually discovered it a few weeks ago but only recently got an account so I'm only getting around to reviewing stuff now). Anyway, its probably my favourite Connor/Robin friendship fic and I love how kick ass Robin was for his friend (boo hiss to bloody Lex Luthor though; great baddie, sucky personality! :D).

My favourite was the end though, when Bruce used the word 'whelming' and Dick laughed. I'm a totally sucker for Bruce/Dick bonding moments.

*spoiler alert*

This was fairly good. The one weak spot I would work on is the stabbing bit of Superboy. It was the climax you were building up to, but then you rushed it. Being stabbed is a fairly intimate process and it is definitely a very sensory one. It would have been a more powerful moment if a) it had been longer and b) more vivd.

From Lex's point of view you could have discussed how much (or little) force it took to pentrate the skin. The way the clones eyes reacted to the pain. The sheer joy of killing a superman look alike. If you wanted to do it from Superbpy's point of view describe shock symptoms. Maybe something like "It didn't hurt. The green stone was sinking into his skin and it didn't hurt. All there was was ice and numbness. Superboy frowned, trying to figure out why he had been so scared. He looked down, a hand moving towards the green shard embedded in his chest. Then his world exploded in agony"

Just pay more attention to how long a moment should be. Other than that, good job.

Interesting. I enjoyed it.

Well done.