Interestingly enough, I just finished watching the last episode of YJ and I was craving a story exactly like this...and here it is! Thank you for this.

LOVED IT! The use of suspense was almost too much; I totally freaked out when Robin got stabbed! But, it's all good now, so... YAY! Can't wait to see more of your work!

Awesome writing! I like how this has a dual perspective, the relationship between Superman/Superboy and Batman/Robin. I especially like how Clark seems to actually care for Conner. I think you emulated the awkwardness the poor guy feels in this kind of situation and his worry for others perfectly.

Other than that, I just loved the writing. It's pretty good!

hehehe...whelming

so you know the spice girls movie right? if not look it up? any way the movie is extremely distracting. so your story keeping me content to the point i forgot it was on is really awesome. so i give u a 100 points. i'll be reading more from you. :D

I never liked Superman and so I never knew much about the Superman series until my aunt made me watch the first movie...and then I knew two things: 1: Superman was a boyscout 2: Lex Luther was a fucking moron!

Fast forward a year and Lex Luther appears in Young Justice and I instantly hated him. A lot! And I really wanted Superman and Superboy to punch in his face!

Sadly, no punching in of face here but I liked it a lot. I spent the whole story freaking out, "Oh god oh god oh god someone help him! Shit who the hell keeps giving this bastard kryptonite! D: Someone help him!" And then Robin comes in and saves the day! Then he gets hurt and I almost started crying. But it turned out alright in the end, and not only that but Superman helped Superboy :) He was actually worried. I call this PROGRESS!

Actually, I'm willing to bet something like this might happen. Seriously, Luther has appeared and proven himself to be bad ass asshole. He will have some of the glowing green death rock on hand and will probably use it on Superboy when YJL goes on a mission that annoys him and of course, Superman will have to help. And be worried. And so they will bond.

Wonderful story, it kept me on the edge of my seat :)

Pretty good, I hope you're able to expand on the superman/superboy relationship in the future. Though it would also be interesting to see a story on the Light; mainly the instigation of Luthor's mentioned planned. Though hopefully said plan is unsuccessful I think it would make a good read. Keep writing.

~~~~Tigress~~~~

Awesome story. Your characters were so believable.

Haha, i loved the end:

Bruce smiled. "Yes, it is a little odd. Almost," he continued with a twinkle in his eye. "Whelming."
Dick laughed, before groaning and being admonished by Alfred. "Best. Word. Ever."

Simply amazing. Usually I don't like stories like this, but it was so well-written out and captivating that I'm favoriting it! Job well done.

Till next time,

The Rowan of the Fall

(Rowanfall)

that was wonderful to read. robin's concern and urge to keep superboy away, superman still grappling with his relationship with his clone, and of course the team's worry for each other. very nicely written.

Very nicely done. You had me on the edge of my seat the whole time.

What a good story! Your writing is amazing.

great story

I was just looking for a good read. I'm glad to have come across yours. The Young Justice taking on Lex Luthor? That was awesome! By the way, the company name is Lexcorp. Just so you know. I watched enough smallville to remember. Other than that, it was beautifully written. Having Robin take the larger kryptonite piece was amazing. I think this one warrants a second piece-a revenge piece from Superboy going after Lex Luthor. Action scenes may pain you, but yours is better than mine, that's for sure. I'm going to let my niece read this piece, since she's a Young Justice fan herself. She loves good stories. And she's only 12.