|Reviews for Teaching Sunlight, Training Moonlight|
| providencia chapter 9 . 8/31/2014
| Hiccup Horrendous Haddock 3 chapter 9 . 9/20/2013
This is amazing writing and I would love to see more...
I really want to find Hiccup become what he is in this story
- A dragon, I think that would be epic...
But I wanna see more. I want to see Stoick push for his son to become Viking to the extent where toothless has a small fight and right in front if Stoick, who is pinned down or something, toothless turns Hiccup deliberately into a night fury so hiccup can be who he truly is and be with toothless rightfully...
A few ideas I would love to see happen,
| Sabre-de-la-Terre chapter 9 . 12/28/2011
It would appear you haven't updated this story for some time-
any chance of more chapters?
It's well written, with plenty of LOL moments...all in all, a very satisfying read!
well done, a nice change from the general garbage of fanfics- this was a good find indeed.
now a fan,
| Tagesh chapter 9 . 7/29/2011
Nice- I think that the elder riding toothless is interesting, and you wrote the scene with feeling! I'm looking forward to what is revealed next, though I don't think Stoick isn't going to like any of it.
Great chapter, and keep up the good work!
| quwira chapter 9 . 7/28/2011
awww i love the elder, she's adorable :D
| Voldyne chapter 9 . 7/27/2011
excellent chapter looking forward to the next, and the revelations regarding Hiccups mother. Stoick wanting a dragon is kind of cool and I happen to find Ody a humorous name if not all that godly :D
| Portgas D. Nikky chapter 9 . 7/27/2011
Man it's been a while since I've reviewed, sorry about that.
So cool! The bit with the Elder was just amazing~
| quwira chapter 8 . 7/19/2011
ohh a new twist! keep up the good work :D
| Voldyne chapter 8 . 7/19/2011
MORE... though Toothless and Stoick can be a bit of an ass... and they were making progress... Looking forward to the next chapter
| Toothless-the-nightfury chapter 3 . 6/12/2011
I found an error in chapter two, but I can't review that since I already have.
"If he sleeps outside then so do it."
Should be 'then so do I'.
But are you going to continue this story? Even if it's a relatively rushed ending, please finish it. This is a really pleasant read and would be a huge shake to leave it abandoned.
| quwira chapter 5 . 3/20/2011
ohhh i like this story please update soon!
| Miseria-Veritas chapter 5 . 3/18/2011
First of all, I must thank you for being one of the few decent authors who doesn't just write a recap of the entire movie. :) It's so irritating to read an interesting description, but then the actual story is nothing new.
Second of all, I like where you've started this - it seems very natural, though the shifts in timeline were confusing at first.
Thirdly (Is that even a word?), can you add more Terrible Terrors? They're just so adorable...
Anyway, great story so far! I hope you update soon!
| deathy A. Saiyania chapter 2 . 3/16/2011
Awesome chapter! That's going going under my favorites list immediately.
| Annabeth The Unicorn chapter 5 . 3/13/2011
Great chapter! More please!
| Toothless-the-nightfury chapter 5 . 3/13/2011
I have to say, the whole 'biting' idea was sheer genius! And yet again, I find myself repeating what I have said before; you can definitely write well. I still cannot find one error.
As for the plot, you seem to be coping abnormally well, so I congratulate you on that. I just cannot fault this story.
So I'm left with my usual, boring, final line...
Thanks for the story so far (really! It'g great!), and please update soon!