Reviews for Habibi
toeki chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
well written, emotional, touching.
i like how shaun is not that sarcastic beneath the facade.
i like how you use the bleeding effect to explain how desmond gets into shauns bed,
and i like that the relationships here are just implied. it is nice to read a story that is not porn.
MelethielMinastauriel chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
So, this is my first review on this site, since I usually add a story to my favourites w/t commenting but, oh, this story, oh this story...!

First of all, I totally LOVE Shaun/Des (it will be my OTP for evermore) and sometimes, reading an angst story is good ) There are too much stories about this two that impling only rough sex (it's okay, but then the reader becomes to want more!) and it's a pity.

So, i stumbled across this story and read it all in one breath.

I liked it, really )

Here are two sentences that touched my heart ;-)

Shaun will be the one to murmur into his ear. And maybe with time Shaun will be the one to wrap his arms around Desmond, whispering Habibi countless times, feeling a smile tug on lips beside his collar bone, and Shaun will have grown a new heart to replace the one he threw away for Desmond fucking Miles.

This, this is why his heart fits better now in an hourglass than in any sort of box

3 C ya :D
xXxSlythherinQueenxXx chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Wow. That plot bunny must have been going pretty fast before it hit you. Such emotions... I feel all angsty now...
Aunty Soshul chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
Gawwwwwd I love good ol' angst. Made me want to sob into a pillow. And lady, there ain't nothing implied about this. XD
KaiiDee23 chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
"Well, he's British, and - little known fact - Britain's third favorite past time (behind colonizing the shit out of things and drinking tea) is listening to other cultures' pop music.

'This is why we never win Eurovision,' Shaun insists. 'We spend too much time reminiscing our lost empire, drinking tea, and listening to other peoples' music, rather than making our own.' Shaun personally admits himself an affinity with Arabic pop music and Italian pop music; take that however you will"

Lol. You clearly know nothing of Britain and it's culture.
bbb136 chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
That tugged on my heart strings so bad. T.T
leaky.oven chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
GFFFFFFF I am a sucker for angst. 3
Dittodots chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
! Poor Shaun! It makes me want to hug him! T_T This is so sad, and beautiful, all at the same time! T_T
catwoman chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
i do enjoy a good plot bunny. nice story really enjoyed it
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SuddenSummerStorm chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Now normally, I NOT a fan of yoai, or whatever it's called, but I actually really liked this. I think it's awesome, and you know what, I thught the little Brit/American jabs were hilarious! I think anyone, even people from those countries, could find those funny :) well done, habibti! (fem version of habibi ;))