Reviews for Harry amidst the Vaults of Stone |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like it so far. I also like the omake and would lie it to be developed further. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one is aware that this story has not been updated in many a year, but nonetheless, khajiit found it enjoyable. Good health to you! May your roads lead to good fortunes. |
![]() ![]() Frankly the not teaching the kid occlumancy is stupid or at least warning him to avoid eye contact when meeting w8th a known death eater each month, when he has goblin secrets to guard.. He seems not to know of the mind arts existence at all aq if he were muggle raised. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh crap! This story came highly recommended to me and I see you put a lot of work into it but then cast it aside. Sad because I really wanted to read it but I no longer bother with abandoned stories as I feel if the author didn't care about it then there is no point in starting it only to get frustrated with no ending. wish I could read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a 8 year old?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yikes- like you author wrote - Expanded beyond my control, I want to go to bed, but I just cannot stop reading this excellent story. See you in the next chapter. Thank you so much for this enjoyable endeavour. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so delighted with this story, but it is not completed. WHAT HAPPENED, WHERE ARE YOU Author? Signed: Broken Hearted |
![]() ![]() Goblins are terrifying! They are ruthless, brutal, and vicious where it serves their interest. The have very deeply instigated values and morals, but good lord! they seem to approach everything with the mindset of war. The deepness of their machinations makes me shiver. Even when they are working in the best interest of Harry Potter it's clear this is a dangerous society that makes every effort to come out ahead, and will cross any lines it can get away with to do so. They aren't a species of sociopaths, but the way they regard wizard kind and their culture it shouldn't surprise anyone that many wizards would see them that way. |
![]() ![]() Noooooo, Dumbledore up till this point had been good and smart, just not smart enough to keep track of Harry on top of all his other responsibilities. He was even ready to rescue him from the Dudleys at age 8 if Miss Figgs had said it was bad. But now we find out that he was the one to stop Sirius trial. That he was stupid and negligent enough to condemn him without confronting him first. That is really bad. |
![]() ![]() The inconsistency I pointed out in chapter 2 was clarified. Very good. Very good. |
![]() ![]() Very good chapter, I enjoyed it immensely. |
![]() ![]() The story might accumulate a few little incongruences overtime. Which is sad in contrast in contrast to how much time and rigours care the Goblins give show to their whole existence. In chapter 1 Sibling in mentioned to be Badluk mate but she herself is not one of the thirteen managers so there is no explanation why she was there during their meeting. Chapter 2 has Sirius as Lord Black which contradicts Albus when he implied that some Blacks were still free and alive that would claim Harry if he wasn't hidden from the wizarding world at that point. It's odd too because earlier he had correctly being implied to be the Black heir instead. Later Andromeda Black is mentioned, but for some reason both McGonagall and Dumbledore were against her. She is not described in detail during the books, most stories feature her as a sort of cool aunt, but in others she is mentally ill. Sometimes both xD. |
![]() ![]() This Is hey super stupid and Boeing. Plus the stupidity of having malformw involve on anything with Harry. This clearly Is going to be a homosexual story. Most be told un Advance so normal people do not waste the Time reading the stupidity. Plus the mayor stupidity the Potter almost poor. Poor story mostly stupidity. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had such a great time reading this fic, then I reached this omake, and I'm left wanting both! Foul fiend of an author! Better to have never written a measly sentence than to have ensnared with plots of marvel and glee. I also loved Lessons with Hagrid, but these two had so much more to offer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there I’ve re read your fanfiction again and I think this may be the second time. I’m sorry if I’m a repetition of what other May I’ve asked already but, av you put thought in continuing this fanfic? It’s FANTASTIC! |