So Dumbledore is an arrogant scum bag. Sounds right.

This is a wonderful story! I hope one day you will update this!

I hope to one day find this work updated again. Until then, thanks for a good read xx

Awesome

this story is way better than harry crow I hop you update one day

Well done! I hope you pick up writing this story again soon. Thank you for sharing

Do you play the discworld MUD?

Ooo, the plot thickens. Malfoy, the pot-stirrer.

An intriguing beginning...

Nice start! I liked how they considered whether they should take Harry in. That was really interesting and also believable. The various displays of magic felt a bit listless in contrast. They were no more enticing to me than a grocery list.

I must disagree. When was Ron ever disloyal? He had his disagreement with Harry in GOF but who doesn’t have disagreements with friends.
And DHRon was influenced by the horcrux and unlike Hermione and Harry had more to lose.

Regarding laziness to learning, well, he is just what most students are. And for lack of empathy, how? I think Hermione is less empathic.
But no, he doesn’t need to be his best friend, but I would wish you will make him a friend like Dean or Seamus.

Innumeracy is not caused by laziness, but it is easier for lazy teachers to blame the student rather than ask for the P.E.T. scans that it would take to identify the brain damage that causes it. Also watch for those that have trouble with telling time and cooking, the trouble with numbers will be across the board- ALL numbers, no matter what they are being used for. Evidently the goblins don't ever suffer this problem, lucky them.

This was an interesting story.

OMG, It's an Australian. A Gryff for certain, and if she is in at the same time as the twins?
Well, you might as well make arrangements with the construction crews now, 'cause there won't be much castle left by Christmas.

If you're not gonna update just take it down seriously