Reviews for Harry amidst the Vaults of Stone |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Omake was brilliant! The main story is very good and interesting! Could move a bit faster. Hope you'll continue it some day :) |
![]() ![]() The amount of stupidity Is too much. Let's drop this un the trash. Bad recomendation, Time wasted on it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "and sloshing slightly" I almost choked something fierce laughing. Great chapter |
![]() ![]() Hi, I’m not going to read anymore, it appears that every character wants a piece or Harry Potter, he’s eight years old, and being looked after and still they want to interfere with his upbringing. Why a Headmaster is so interested in Harry has never been questioned that alone would be strange. DaveC |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always a great read, I wish there was more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck the Wizarding World those wankers! Can't they just ask him where he wants to stay!? I hope they all die horrible deaths! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really cool story and I'm enjoying it so far. I can't wait to read more as I go on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, I was kinda hoping to see harry get to show off like in Harry Crow. It's never any fun when authors introduce tougher challenges to balance things out, especially adding tons of OC elements simply for the purpose of making things difficult. But hey, I guess a lot of people don't like seeing characters that get so powerful without the story rising extra stuff to compensate for it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why would he feel bad about a thief being killed if that was the norm? Morals are a purely social construct. In older times, people -even children- screamed for blood in things like gladiator fights and public executions. To think of killing as a bad thing in and of itself is a modern construct. And it doesn't always apply either. (Military killers are treated as heroes in the states, for example, and some people still think death sentences are a good thing. And that's without even considering the criminal elements' viewpoints.) How did Harry end up with that viewpoint? Who taught him that killing a thief is bad? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I fail to see the problem with eating horse, but I suppose it's all cultural preferance. Either way, it's brilliantly written! An outsider's view on english wizarding culture. _ (Which I am inclined to believe is derived from pre-victorian muggle culture -going back to from before the two split apart. I presume somewhere around the witch trials... I'm sure potterwiki has a date. Lol Either way, it's no wonder muggleborn struggle. The culture may seem archaic, and they fail to understand that wizards have no use for science, as what is done by machines in the modern muggle world seems to always have a magical equalent that makes muggle machines surpurfluent. Although I AM suprised women are allowed to vote and have a job. Although the whole system appears to be nephotistic (is that a word? Runnung on nepotism), which means that it favors those grown up in the wizarding world over those who has not -regardless of blood status or views on said blood status. Anyway... that's just my theory.) Keep writing! This is getting interesting! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE how you take into account the cultural differences in your story. _ |
![]() ![]() i love all the insanity in the past few chapters |
![]() ![]() Why wouldn't they protect harry s mind im sure they know of the mind arts |
![]() ![]() ![]() Crescent of Mornington? Hah! Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Worst thing is the uncreativity of following Canon. No matter what you do, Canon!Bumblemore is either a dark lord or an idiot. Find something good and intelligent he did in Canon. Did he help Harry learn to fight Did he concern himself with horcruces while Harry grew up Did he apparently place total faith in a prophesy? Did he let Snape leave with the first part of the prophesy, setting up Potters and Longbottoms to be attacked Did he hire Snape and protect him even though (1) he couldn't possibly have done anything between the time Snape realized the Potters were targets and the time of the attack and (2) he was abusing the children he was paid to teach How many bad teachers did the "best" school have Should I go on? |