Reviews for Simple
solisticio chapter 2 . 10/11/2020
oh my that hurt bad please revisit this and give it a happy ending
hello2708 chapter 2 . 8/1/2015
Wonderful story! Great lemon scene! Please revisit.
Katy A. Awkward chapter 2 . 9/28/2014
hmmmm... ;)
doingsomeliving chapter 2 . 10/21/2013
liked it, hope you write another chapter
Quinntana2 chapter 2 . 7/13/2013
:)(: Your writing is so beautiful.
I mean everything is described is amazing detail.
I feel bad for Tori but Jade is lying so...
Brilliant story. :)(:
Quinntana2 chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
:)(: Alright.. so I'd like to say the girls are wonderfully in character.
Also, I really enjoyed the chapter and can't wait to see what happens next. :)(:
ChristianeRoos chapter 2 . 7/2/2013
YES. Awesome. Amazing.
HeatherSS1 chapter 2 . 4/3/2013
Wow. Just... Wow. Very well written. I feel bad for Tori (...sorta). Jade is my fav and you write her well, and I can completely see her callousness spilling over into her sex life, so... wow.
JoriReader chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
Perfect writing, perfect fanfic. Thank you so much for writing this story!
Elimere chapter 2 . 12/13/2012
Ah jeez! You can't leave it there! Though this was extremely good and emotional and wonderfully written, it's not finished!
Love it. Please continue.
Thanks!
qefjkl chapter 2 . 11/17/2012
My god. I wouldnt say awesome because it's really more than that... But I cant come with a better word
What can I say? You are always so amazing
denunz5 chapter 2 . 11/14/2012
Not the ending I expected.. but beautifully written regardless. I always love a happy ending, but I must say I'm intrigued with how it appears that Jade didn't really pick up on how Tori felt about her.
chase19 chapter 2 . 10/24/2012
Ugh! Tell me there is a sequel?! I couldn't help but wanted more.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/11/2012
1. You have very skilled boobs 2. You should continue this.
Nouf chapter 2 . 9/4/2012
Nononononononononononono omfg please update this make it a chaptered fic please. I beg of you.
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