oh my that hurt bad please revisit this and give it a happy ending

Wonderful story! Great lemon scene! Please revisit.

hmmmm... ;)

liked it, hope you write another chapter

:)(: Your writing is so beautiful.
I mean everything is described is amazing detail.
I feel bad for Tori but Jade is lying so...
Brilliant story. :)(:

:)(: Alright.. so I'd like to say the girls are wonderfully in character.
Also, I really enjoyed the chapter and can't wait to see what happens next. :)(:

YES. Awesome. Amazing.

Wow. Just... Wow. Very well written. I feel bad for Tori (...sorta). Jade is my fav and you write her well, and I can completely see her callousness spilling over into her sex life, so... wow.

Perfect writing, perfect fanfic. Thank you so much for writing this story!

Ah jeez! You can't leave it there! Though this was extremely good and emotional and wonderfully written, it's not finished!
Love it. Please continue.
Thanks!

My god. I wouldnt say awesome because it's really more than that... But I cant come with a better word
What can I say? You are always so amazing

Not the ending I expected.. but beautifully written regardless. I always love a happy ending, but I must say I'm intrigued with how it appears that Jade didn't really pick up on how Tori felt about her.

Ugh! Tell me there is a sequel?! I couldn't help but wanted more.

1. You have very skilled boobs 2. You should continue this.

Nononononononononononono omfg please update this make it a chaptered fic please. I beg of you.