Reviews for Onion
Guest chapter 1 . 5/18
nice story
Guest chapter 8 . 2/27
Holly Sh** This is Abandoned ?
Incredibly well written and interesting fic, with greatest potential...if you ever come back...you'd make me the happiest person alive...and so many others as well. it is a shame for this to be untold.
perfection...
Guest chapter 8 . 1/1
Happy new year
& may you grant us the gift of continuation of this amazingly well written story.
Guest chapter 8 . 12/18/2014
What an unbelievable awesome story...
YOU HAVE TO continue it please!
Characterization is perfect,
Development of their relationship is going so slowly and exactly the right way,
And plot is great, the threat is very much real...
I am totally in love with this!

3 this has to be a story with greatest KakaNaru potential and realistic approach... 3 the best pairing... UPDATE PLS
Teacuppy chapter 2 . 11/17/2014
Hello there,

yeah it's me again!

I was thinking maybe if I leave dozen more reviews this will magicaly be continued...

not that it's possible to leave more reviews than it has chapters bur Still!

I can at least annoy you (LOL) until I run out of space...

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE I LOVE KAKASHI MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE I LOVE NARUTO MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE...
I caught your virus apparently and it's your fault! after reading chapter 5 and 7 for the millionth time I cannot possibly want this more... XD
Teacuppy chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
oooooo GOD of writing please come back to this story, I've reread it a few dozen times since discovering it :-) and it still is as brilliant as ever just unfortunately abandoned... what a pity... I wish I can write like this. If I could I'd probably finish this for myself...there's so much potential in this.

I would definitely have 'Madara' be defeated sooner but leave Sasuke for last as Main villain and have him fight with Naruto and aftermath of battle would be really dramatic as well as his mental condition but he'll have someone to comfort him and be happy with...
Or something like that, I'm not so good with English and can't express my thoughts well...
Teacuppy chapter 8 . 6/16/2014
It's official, you ruined me for any other fics, nothing will ever be as good as this,
Pls have time to update this, or I'll... :-(
Teacuppy chapter 7 . 6/16/2014
Seriously you are the best, this was unbelievably good, this is by far the best fic of this kind so far, it's pure perfection, it's filled with so much emotions, I just love every bit of it. Thank you, and I can only hope for more :-)
Teacuppy chapter 3 . 6/16/2014
I haven't read all the chapters yet, but I am already in love with this story, I can tell that you are excellent writer.
You are developing Kakashis character quite well.
And thank you for having KakaNaru here because it's rare and I really appreciate it a lot, they are my abs favorites. And thank you for taking your time to develop their relationship. I'm fascinated by Kakashi too, he is my favorite, but I love Naruto and Itachi too. ofc many others as well.
Well I'm not much of a reviewer but I really appreciate your work, and wanted to tell you that :-) your work is perfect!
guest chapter 8 . 1/13/2014
I can't really express how much I enjoy your story. I love your depiction of the characters and the realistic development they undergo as individuals. Please continue updating - I notice it's been a while - as I am seriously dying to read it.
LunarCatNinja chapter 8 . 12/26/2013
I love how in depth you're getting into the personalities of the characters. I'm looking forward to reading more!
lovetolongago chapter 8 . 10/1/2013
I honestly don't know how this fic has escaped me for so long! Why haven't I read it before!? I think it's absolutely lovely and wonderfully well written. The emotional quality of the story is great. The characters seem well written and fleshed-out - They don't seem OOC to me at all. The lack of canon doesn't bother me at all - It doesn't detract from the story in any way, so don't worry about that.

I've greatly loved reading these first 8 chapters. Thanks for sharing. It's excellent.
fortuna16 chapter 8 . 8/11/2013
The development of the relationship between Naruto and Kakashi is top-notch. KakaNaru is my OTP but there are only a handful, HANDFUL, of fanfiction that accurately capture the characterizations of Naruto and Kakashi and their relationship. I could (and already have) re-read Onion several times. The dialogue and introspective scenes are amazing and I look forward to your updates.
Failisse chapter 8 . 6/13/2013
Wow. I really like the way this story is going. You're developing the romance at a good pace and the characters as well.

I really like what you did in this chapter, having the team face their insecurities. That was genius.

I also think that the way you've written this very professional. You've kept the sentences neat and tidy, and the paragraphs as well. You're using matured language, I don't mean swearing but rather that your words are high quality and well written. And you've managed to keep the characters true to themselves but also show how they've matured throughout the story. That's a real accomplishment.

Thank you for writing this wonderful piece of fan fiction. I can wait to read more. Please update again soon!

- Failisse
twilightromance4ever chapter 8 . 6/8/2013
.Gosh. This is AMAZING! I really hope you come back because i already love it and there really isn't even any romance in it yet! :D
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