Reviews for The Dark Sky, Left
The Last Ronin chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Cute, wistful and a bit sad. I liked it.
Purple Embers chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
A great little sad oneshot.


Just when I was starting to feel happy again. ;)

Maybe some punctuation showing when Tobias was thought speaking to her though would've been good.

Such as , ((I should go))

Well that's what I've seen around here when people are trying to convey thoughtspeak.

Overall, I loved it, Tobias and Rachel are a great pairing to write about and very easy and nice to read.


kkeya chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Poor them. I think you did a really good job capturing the complicated sadness of their relationship.