Wow Morgan, that was low... I expected him to hold out better under one of Reid's lectures. :(

Reid's reaction to the others makes sense, especially Morgan. On the show, seems like he saw Morgan like that for a long time, before he told Morgan about his bullying (and especially since I don't think Reid ever found out about Morgan's history with Buford), I like that you included that. I'm worried about how Hudson will treat Reid...

Just a note, didn't like reading the bit where they badmouth female FBI agents abilitites - equating their fighting skills to at best matching a man on an 'off day'.

I love this chapter

Yes!

that was one helluva story! i absolutely loved it!

i thought that your ending was really nice. your syory was very well wrotten and i loved it. i would love for another story to be put up with the characters hudston and nicols in it. awesome story

I disagree with his letter it's (his work,job,or efforts) about solving cases ,and getting murderers of the street

I know reids shy, but wouldn't he point things out with the importance of the case

I find your dismissal of female combat abilities horrifying and as a human being I take offense. Not only is it a discredit to the show, which has gone out of its way to be generally gender neutral, it's an inaccurate portrayal of the characters, Morgan perhaps most of all, considering his experience as a minority. Also, perpetuating such a damaged cycle by transcribing an interaction like the one in your story does nothing but validate the idea that women are somehow inferior to men. This detracts from what would have otherwise been a very nice story, and I'm sorry to see it there.

Hey, great story, I absolutely loved it!

I truly enjoyed this story, I loved the different backstory and team dynamic. Just perfect.

A few minor SPAG errors, but on the whole a good story.

I appreciate the one step at a time sentiment.

I am looking forward to Reid's character development!

I find this story quite interesting.