Reviews for Eternal Changes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What An Amazing Story! You did the team justice. Every word they said, I could hear it in my head as though it was on the TV. Their actions, reactions and general conversations were really well done and felt true to their personalities. I LOVED this story! Well Done! |
![]() ![]() Great Story. Kept me riveted for days. Loved every bit of it. Probably the best I've read in this fandom so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love to see another story with Nichols. . .possibly helping Morgan with Reid and the effects of the Hankle case. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this, great characterisation :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story. So sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed your story. I was sad to realize that Hudson was killed eventhough he had be awful to Reid through most of the story, I hated to see that. I did love the Nichols character. This was so thought out and well written. Thanks for sharing your story. You are very talented. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just knew the hacker was going to be Garcia. |
![]() ![]() Ah, I want a sequel of some sorts to this, loves it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() For some reason when I reviewed this story the other day it posted it as a guest, and didn't add your story to my favorites like it was supposed to. I'm not Garcia or Nichols though so I'll just try this again! Thanks again for writing this story! God Bless, SW |
![]() ![]() A lot of things could be said about this story, but I think I'll start with, wow! This was amazing! I was so sorry to see it end, it was so good. I love the friendship between Morgan and Reid, Nichols was very likable and fun as well. I saw Garcia coming the second time you mentioned the database being hacked, cute way to bring her in by the way. This story was just so good! I would love to read a sequel to it! It would also be fun to see a story in which the current BAU team gets to hear about some of the stories from back when Reid, Morgan, Nichols, and Hudson worked together. Just a thought! Good job on this story! I love the friendship and... well, pretty much everything! God Bless, SW |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great story! I practically stayed up all night to read it and only really put it down to do the essentials of living...I.e. eating. I hope you wrote another story with Hudson and Nichols as I'm interested in more of their story. Anyways great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story! And beautiful ending, congratulations on finishing such an enjoyable piece, and thank you for putting it up here for us all to read! Your OCs were absolutely excellent, enough that anyone who wasn't too familiar with the characters might just have to check whether you actually created them or if they're canon! A few minor punctuation/grammar errors, but nothing at all that would detract from the reading. I loved getting a look at how Reid fit into the team, and the bonus of how Garcia got recruited was wonderful! Overall, a very realistic and enjoyable piece. Again, thank you! |
![]() ![]() Sorry, the site cut off my ramble: you did really well in showing how much Hotch loved Hailey, even tough you also showed the beginning of the distance between them. All in all, a great story the likes of which are rare these days. TS |
![]() ![]() That story was EPIC! I fully meant to leave a comment after every chapter but I just couldn't stop. I am amazed. This was like watching a season story arc on the actual show. I have so many good things to say, yet I feel speechless. I loved the background of Morgan and Reid's friendship, and how eventually Hudson came around. I loved how you put in there they were trying to create the media liason position, and the illustration of Garcia coming into the bureau. I'm not a big fan of Gideon, but in this he was perfect not only for his slight absence from the main focus but because he seemed imperfect. So many authors go the "saint Gideon"route, and I'm happy you didn't. Loved Nichols, and even Hudson. I'd absolutely love another story with them! Hotch was great in this, and youdid really well |
![]() ![]() Great start so far, I'm excited to see what's next! TS |