I've been looking for. like this everywhere! I really enjoyed it. I woukd personally love maybe a fic that shows garcia joining in all ! Great job xxx

Hehe interesting choice of fake name. This was the equation I got in my head, tell me if I'm right. Ebenezer Scrooge A Christmas Carol Jacob Marley Jake Marley?

This is the best story about Reid joining the BAU I've ever read!You have should write a squeal,chapter 38 and on.

Too many fics I have read have made Haley out to be a bad person. I think your treatment of her is both in character and heartwarming. She has always had a loving heart. Even when she and Hotch got a divorce, it was obvious that she still loved him, even though she and Jack came second to his work. I just want you to know that it's your characterizations of the individuals (main characters or otherwise) that make this work the quality material that it is and I hope you never lose that in your writing.

your story is really well done and I would definitely be interested in another story with Nichols and Hudson.

Great story. Liked the interaction of the team members as they and Reid got to know each other.

Congratulations on winning the best overall CM Fic. That's how I found this story. So far I like it. It's got a lot of crime detail and your dialog matches the characters very well.

Wait this isn't the last chapter is it? I hope not it's such a great story!

I'm just going to throw this out and tell me if I am wrong

He's killed a mother and her son- The Shining

an eight-year-old boy- It

a woman in her early twenties- Pet Cemetary

five teenagers- Carrie

All Stephen King books but when you said that the boy went off with a clown my mind went to Pennywise the Dancing clown from It and yeah.

This is an AMAZING story! Loved it all! Hope you make a sequal! :D The case was fantastic as well and you write the characters great! Would love to see Nichols and Hudson again!

Wow. This was AMAZING. I was soo sad when I finished reading it.

What a wonderful job you did - very professional. Held to the characters as in the canon but filled them out realistically.

Will be reading the rest of your stories re Criminal Minds.

Yes. Write another story with Hudson and Nichols. I'm as attached to them as I am to the actual criminal minds characters. They're so well devoloped! I absolutely love them. The next time I turn CM I'm probably going to look for them and then realize they're not there.

You really have a talent, if talent even covers it all. The cases seemed so real. Honestly, you should send this in to the CM writers. The cases and character dynamic were that good. Now every time i see a Stephen King novel I think of this. Fantastic!

perfect end to an awesome story. I love how everything fell into place. love it.

Wow.

I'm not sure what else to say, really. The end is always bitter sweet when the writing is this well. I just spent the majority of my day (and part of last night - err, early this morning I suppose) reading this story. I was busy with a guest but I couldn't stop thinking about getting back on to read the next chapter. I sat there reading the small print on my iPod while my friend was here, just because I couldn't put it down. I really, really enjoyed this and I thank you for blessing this fandom with this amazing story! Very well-written and the characters are, well, in character!

And I loved Hudson and Nichols. I'm actually admitting to tearing up at the end, when I found out that Hudson had died. I was hating on him the entire story until the end (which I think was supposed to happen) and I'm very sad to see him go. Liked Nichols coming in at the end though!

Ah, this is going to my favorites now.

Write more please.