What? The story is over? Oh man, well, we all knew this day would come. The point is that you ended this story with a bang. It's nice how you were able to pull everything back to the first chapter. Morgan's thoughts while talking to JJ the night of the case is nice. You did an excellent job referring back to Morgan's past when he failed to protect Reid. It helps to understand what JJ is feeling even after Reid is rescued.

Oh my gosh, what you did to Hudson. It's nice to see after all they went through that he did that for Reid. You've really done a marvelous job with Hudson throughout your story. It's also good to see Reid visiting his grave after the case. The conversation between him and Morgan about what Hudson did is well written. You should consider doing a side story about Hudson's sacrifice.

It's interesting that Nichols can see something is not right with Reid. Seeing as how close he was with Reid, and the fact that he used to be a profiler, it makes sense that he would notice. Good work with leaving the story with Nichols warning Morgan to keep an eye on Reid.

This whole story has been a delight to read. Outstanding work from beginning to end.

You ended this story beautifully! The epilogue was truly wonderful, and I squealed with joy when Nichols came up to Morgan and Reid in the cemetery. :) And Hudson dying was so, so sad, but you tied it in beautifully with the agents dying in Boston. And I just love the way you wrote Morgan and Nichols with Reid, so lovely.

Wonderful, wonderful job!

This story has been amazing I think the best of it has been it's realism. I could truly picture your OCs and the situations you put them in. More of these two - yes please. Thank you for a brilliantly written story.

DEFINITELY WRITE ANOTHER STORY WITH HUDSON AND NICHOLS :) The way you wrote this story and incorporated the new-old characters, hudson and nichols, into it was amazing. You should definitely be a criminal minds writer! And i loved how you ended this story, though i am incredibly sad to see it end ): Every time i came on fanfic, i would immediately look for an update of this story, then pass out once i saw it had been updated, read it, then go and cry in the bathroom for a few hours once i realised i would have to wait for another update :) ANYWAYS! Keep it up, and WRITE ANOTHER STORY! Or i'll be forced to sneak into your house and tie you to a chair and force you to write another one ... *Menacing look* ;)

Just what a needed - managed another couple of chapters tonight. The tension is really great, I have loved the build up - looking forward to reading the rest very soon. sorry for the short review.

Great ending to a wonderful story! I have really enjoyed reading this and am sad to see it end! I would love another story with Hudson and Nichols!

I love Hudson and Nichols. I love this story and I love you for writing it! You wove this background story you've created into what happened on the show so perfectly that it seems totally plausible that Hudson and Nichols were actual members of the BAU before the show aired. I would love to see more storied with these guys in it. Well done!

Very nice epilogue chapter. It does make sense that Hudson would've died that day since he isn't on the team in present day. Wouldn't mind reading that story where Hudson died.

I have loved this story from the start and am kinda heartbroken to see it end. I looked forward to your updates. I would love to see more of Hudson and Nicoles (I hope I spelled that right and if I didn't I'm sorry). Thank ya for sharin' this amazin' story with us. I enjoyed it greatly. I hope we see more of your characters in the near future!
Lynn

i cant believe the story is over.

i've been reading this story for the last few days now.

when i get home from college i read a few chapters before i do my course work.

i know this is gonna sound weird, but i feel like i'm losing some friends now its over.

i wouls love to read a side story.

maybe a little light-hearted story of the team?

all i can say is that i'm really looking forward to reading your other works and i would definately recommend for people to read this story

This was quite possibly one of the best completed stories I have ever read. I looked forward to updates every week and I too am sad that this is over. I have very few complaints, if any at all. Amazing job. Thank you for a great story!

I loved the story! I was a bit of confused at the beginning of the chapter, but near the middle I suddenly understood. Also, I would love another story with Nichols and Hudson, preferably with Hudson alive

I have absolutely loved this story and i think that you did an amazing job. Keep up the good work!

AMG! why did it have to end :( I cant believe you killed hudson i spend most of the story thinking what a dick,to awe i love him and than BAM! dead D: but yes anyways loved it! and definietly want to see another story with hudson and nichols

Strange feelings. It's great that it's finished (and 39 chapters is going some). Also sorry that it's finished as I won't have my weekly (and that's going some) fix.

So one vote yes for more with Hudson and Nichols.