Reviews for Eternal Changes
Guest chapter 39 . 8/10/2015
C'était une super fanfiction ;3

Je suis heureuse que Spencer ait réussi à prouver sa valeur au sein du BAU. C'est bien qu'Huston se soit rendu compte de ses erreurs et ce soit excusé auprès de Reid :)

It was a excellent fanfiction ;3

I am happy because Spencer managed to find his place in the BAU. Also, it's nice Huston realized his mistakes and he apologized to Reid :)

Sorry if I made mistakes .' I am not an English-speaker and English is not my native language. I am French :3
Village-Mystic chapter 39 . 7/19/2015
Good stuff. I don't know if you invited Nichols, but I like that you have created characters that are still alive and friends with Reid (and Morgan) outside of the constraints of what we can see the mission related episodes.
Village-Mystic chapter 38 . 7/19/2015
Very nice. Good work overall on the story. I'd give it a 9 out of 10 on a 10 point scale with 10 being the best and 1 being the lowest.
Village-Mystic chapter 36 . 7/19/2015
Good story beat.
Village-Mystic chapter 28 . 7/19/2015
I recognized the staging from "Carrie" but would have said "Horror movies" and not known well enough to say "Stephen King Novels," by the time Reid pointed it out.
Village-Mystic chapter 25 . 7/19/2015
Good bit of drama and character interactions here.
Village-Mystic chapter 24 . 7/19/2015
Very well done. Didn't realize you were going to dramatize this part of the "background" - although I could see you leading us there as a sub-plot.
Village-Mystic chapter 22 . 7/19/2015
I don't think Reid is a "bad shot," - he's just had less gun experience... and likes to use his mind before his hardware. This continues to be super-excellent.
Village-Mystic chapter 21 . 7/19/2015
Top notch writing and style. Missed one word on your edit pass through - you have a they're for their (jobs, assignments). The whole story is worth collecting for an "official" or semi-offical pro-novel tie in. I'm enjoying it a lot. Thanks for sharing.
Village-Mystic chapter 19 . 7/19/2015
The other factor now that they have a 5 block radius is to check flower shops. People commute, so it would be low priority, but to have such a short period of time between the kiils and the roses means there could be someone picking up single roses or small bunches of roses (3 or 4 at a time) in the area. Good call that "hiding something" doesn't necessarily mean being the killer, either.
Village-Mystic chapter 18 . 7/19/2015
Another factor is that as a genius Reid is used to things "coming easy" or at least "coming fast" to him. It probably all his advisors in college could do to get him to stay for the full 4 years (as college experience is more than academics), and that's probably why he was able to handle a triple major and go directly to a masters degree/doctorate one year later. I like how part of Reid's learning arc is that some things are not academic knowledge and need time - and he's fighting against it, because he's never had to fully realize that before (not to mention the self-estime issues).
Village-Mystic chapter 11 . 7/18/2015
Good stuff. Really also worked as an episode tag or intro character moments based on the pacing of the story so far.
Village-Mystic chapter 9 . 7/18/2015
Yep. Hotch is stoney enough to have already known. Good call. Good work with the case writing, too.
Village-Mystic chapter 7 . 7/18/2015
Developing well. Also by having the box of the original files in NV, Reid can organize and review them, too.
Village-Mystic chapter 6 . 7/18/2015
Continuing to enjoy the depth of the character moments and backstory. The case part is put together very well, too.
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