|Reviews for Not Quite|
| CeffylGwyn chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
ehehhe love how he turned her bumblings back on her :p cuteness!
| InvisibleBlade chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
Awww cute story :)
| Mijo54 chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
c'est une des premières histoires que j'ai lues quand j'ai découvert ce site ! je ne savais pas comment laisser une critique maintenant que je sais, je voulais vous dire combien j'ai aimé cette histoire,le fait que Becker sache son histoire, le remake de l'épisode 2 de la saison 4, et le joli coliier qu'il lui offre !
c'est une jolie histoire !
| LianaDare8 chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
| ShootingTigers chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
That necklace sounded perfect for Jess and I loved how Becker remembered despite the day they had. His teasing is so adorable as are her comebacks- I just love their banter! :D
| RileyAnders chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
Husbands, boyfriends or girlfriends :D I can see the scene from Primeval right in front of me and this is as much good as it was in the show.
| Heyarandomgal chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Thank you! You've put a smile on my face it was a really good story.
Btw this is the part that made me smile loads.
Becker looked at her seriously. "Don't worry, I didn't read any of the personal bits," he said. "You know, like about husbands or boyfriends... or girlfriends." He gave her a wide-eyed innocent look as his voice took on a teasing edge. "But I guess it would be a boyfriend you had if you had any of those–"
"Oh, go and do your paperwork!" Jess exclaimed, flinging herself back into her chair and turning away from him. Becker started laughing and Jess shook her head, unable to stop herself from grinning along with him.
| Sarcastic-Bones chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Aww, so realistic and sweet with the necklace. Plus, I loved the inclusion of the "boyfriends, or girlfriends..." thing. :)
| dayana82 chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
Awwww! Totally loved this! *grins from ear to ear*
I've read a few Becker/Jess stories lately, and this definitely goes to my top 5 list. So lovely! And so them. ;)
| renisanz chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
This was so sweet and enjoyable. The characterizations were spot on. I loved how Becker teased Jess in the end. :)
| Ruthibobs chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
awww, cute cute cute! love it loads!
| mahjong90mulan chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
awwwwww... this is so something I could see happening esp. after epi 6... I think that situation with the bomb and the hug was their way of giving us some sort of major hint with Jess and Becker without actually having them be together... i was so mad that they didn't have any jess/becker stuff in episode 7 tho i assume that they did that because it leaves any possibilities they want for them open for next series (like making them end up together or something) you know?
| Esmerelda Diana Parker chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
*squeals and bounces* I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! *squeals again* damn it Becker! why do you have to be so perfect?
| Squabble chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
I loved the end bit with the boyfriends...or girlfriends. :D
Anything you write makes me like Jecker a bit more :)
| missgwen33 chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
So, so much love for this! Really loved the throw back about reading files. Great, lovely piece.