Reviews for The First Eight Days
Anana553 chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
great job!

this was a very depressing, still beautiful fic

very well written

rip maes :(
Aurora-Borealis Coyote chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
You really seem to understand Roy's feelings of loss and guilt very well, there are few things worse than losing your close friend and that was shown painfully well. I love this piece.

"The thing about Riza was, she didn't need the acknowledgment. Whatever she was doing, she chose to do on her , Roy realized, might be much stronger than him." that is a very interesting analysis.

"The ones he wanted to protect the most he could find no way to save." very true, that's a good quality that always ended up hurting Roy.

I really liked the part where he imagines the human transmutation. You see stories where Roy actually goes through with it but seeing it this way was captivating.