|Reviews for La Beep Beep|
| InkedBaby chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Uh... speechless. So perfect.
| soofine11 chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
This is sooooo good. I'm so happy I found it, if you made this a legit full length story I may, no I WILL die of excitement. THis is too good to be just a oneshot. I never review storie but this one i just had to! it was amazingggg
| LMBB chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
This was fabulous. I loved it.
| Jenny Window chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Whimsical, poignant, tender, dreamy story of love. A deserving winner.
| annaharding chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Oooh! I want an Edward like that for my own! Thanx so much for this reading enjoyment!
| Lux123 chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
1st: I want some fruity pebbles... not the cereal.
2nd: Swedish Fish are delicious and nutritious.
And 3rd: I want to smell like Skittles so Edward will make out w/ me.
Loved it. Was poetic, tho not too flowery. Had a kind of dazey cadence to it. Appropriate for the contest.
Music references: pure-fucking-win.
I've been told to read you, Yellowglue. And now that I've read this, its shows me that I should get my ass in gear and read you asafp. ;)
| 6dlb5 chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
| insanemum chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
That was just gorgeous sigh. Really, really lovely. They took it slow and that was just fine. Thankyou for sharing :)
| evilnat chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
This story was killer. gave me butterflies!
so sweet! :o)
| Edmazing chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
I set out wanting to find my favorite lines to quote to you... and ending up re reading pretty much the whole thing.
This really is such a great story. The depth, the descriptions, the dizziness- all of it was there! Just loved how into Bella Edward was.
"I love her with my kisses and I want to love her deeper, with my heart. With my cock too, but deeper than that. I want to be her man."
| secretgeek17 chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
loved this. Just so so sweet. Thank you.
| FangLang chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
I loved this *so* hard. It was the perfect mix of events, characters, feelings... I just fell into the ease of it. Of feeling happy for Bella that she was starting somewhere new in a really good place... Of how she met Edward, and met him again and how they fell together. It was sweet and lovely and made me smile/ It was hot and heavy but not heavy bad -but heavy with all these delicious pent up emotions.
| Fangster Ofluv chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
awww! So sweet, I love this!
| MaryElizabeth23 chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
"Can you come for me like this..." yeah, I know who you are and you rock my dusty fucking socks. Js. (hopefully Im right)
| jewles622 chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Oh my god this one of my all time favorite oneshots ever! You truly rock my socks baby!