Reviews for Tattletelling Hearts
Amore2210.Loves. Fanfic chapter 2 . 3/1/2013
i'm little confuse. who is luna?
Phantom's-only-Christine chapter 4 . 4/29/2011
o.O grrr, want. more. soooo. addictng. more. erik. confuzzled. about. nicknames...
Lady NeverAfterNon chapter 3 . 3/2/2011
It's lovely, but you do have to be careful about putting song lyrics in your work. It's in the rules and they can get you for it. I know cause I had some of my stuff deleted, I was so mad. Anyway, just thought I'd let you know!
Lady NeverAfterNon chapter 2 . 3/2/2011
Interesting he thinks she's a ghost. Good idea.
Lady NeverAfterNon chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Celeste, Celeste, what have you gotten yourself into? As always I am jealous of your skill! I'm stoke to finish reading this!
RejectedAndLoved chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Stina666

This story has a very good concept, one that I like since it continues the story with fresh characters. You have a very good beginning to the story as well with really good dialog. My only conflict would be that there is little character developement in Chapter One. In addition, the transitions in Chapter Two are also slightly choppy. The vocal scene was written very well (I loved it) but there was no transition from Celeste to Luna. Who is Luna? That scene I was expecting Celeste. Still a good concept! I just wish for some more character backround.
TheBellChronicles chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Gahh so good. Plus, I LOVE the name Celeste! :) Keep it up!