Reviews for Next of Kin
jmlane1966 chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
That was a wonderful moment in that episode and your reflection added to it perfectly.
TriGemini chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
This was really good to read. Enjoyed it, a lot.
anonkp chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
So sweet and well written!
Penelope the Perky Penguin chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
:) Nicely done.
Silent Sage chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
This was a ridiculously adorable drabble. I love family fics, especially the way you wrote Marty so...not necessarily fragile, but cautious, especially facing Hetty when she knows basically everything. Really great fic.
IGottaFindYou chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
This episode was DEFINITELY my favorite episode this season!...So far, anyway.:):P I absolutely loved the Kensi/Deeks scenes and the Deeks/Hetty scene at the end was so sweet. Hetty's so motherly towards him.:) She's kind of motherly towards Callen too but it seems to be more about friendship with them, with Deeks it seems like more of a surrogate mother/son relationship, which is so sweet.:):)

Great story.:):):) I was sure throughout the episode that he was eeither gonna put down Kensi or Hetty as his next of kin:)...and I love that she gave him her real name to use, instead of just an alias, it shows how much she cares.:)
Izzie McCool chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
I just have one thing to say;

Love it :) It's short, but you says just enough and i just love it!
Chianna chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
What a great idea for the story! Well done.
cein chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Oh damn!

Hetty and Deeks are my two favourite characters and I love to see them interact in fic.

I think you've caught Deeks's train of thought completely in this little tale.

thank you
Angel of the Night Watchers chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Great little one shot! Deeks is my favorite!
b chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
great one shot, you nailed his character and the facial expressions of what was on his mind.
LOTRRanger chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
That was so extremely wonderful! I think you gave an amazing, if sad, glimpse into the mind of Marty Deeks that we've been missing on the show. Hetty is such a mother, and Deeks so badly needs the good parental figure that he never had. This was a really good tag! Probably one of your best!

You should write some more NCIS:LA. :) You're good at it!


P.S. Welcome back! :)
lrigD chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Well, for being rusty this sure was an excellent story!

I loved the insight into Deeks. It fits him, even if it's something we've hardly (if ever) seen on the show. It also explains why Deeks asked his next of kins question the way he did, because it was so obvious that he just wanted Hetty as a next of kin.

Loved it! Well done :)
krazykitkat chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Lovely look into Deeks' head. There's something really special about the scenes with Deeks and Hetty, they've clicked from the start.