Reviews for Eclipsed |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is really well written, and I hope you continue it. It's interesting to see Ranma as something other then his/her usual cookie-cutter senshi appearance, but still be tied to it. I'm loving how you've portrayed everyone so far, and I can't wait to see more...especially since I still have so many unanswered questions! Thanks for posting, TKB17 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to state this is probably one of my favorite unfinished Setsuna/Ranma fanfictions and I absolutely adore your storyline to it. I hope you decide to release more, especially the confrontation between the senshi/setsuna about her odd behavior |
![]() ![]() ![]() Updat' 'dis shite! 10/10 Pretty decent, your dialogue is really well done! |
![]() ![]() I recently found your works via Lux and began backtracking your series. I know this is still in the works via your biography (or so I hope so) but I have to state, I highly look forward to the coming clash between Ranma meeting the senshi and look forward to seeing Setsuna try (and likely fail) at keeping her composure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah this is so amazing. I really do hope that some day you return to this one and complete it! Excellent characterization and dialogue. Bliss! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story and awesome job on the romance! |
![]() ![]() Still so much like all the other ranma sailor moon fics. Is it too much to ask for all around good chars, unlike every other fic where Ranma is good, all the others from his series are bad, and all the Scouts are bad or evil or dumb. Really tried of the same thing over and over. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very well done story. I've been aware of several Ranma and Sailor Moon crossovers, but this definitely blends the two with a great deal of care. I do enjoy how you made the relationship here work as well, that can be tricky. Pulled it off, though. I'd be delighted to see more of this in the future. Thanks for the incredible read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the way you've expanded the background information. The idea of Serenity leading a Conquest of the Sol System is interesting in and of itself. The way you weave the characters and their motives actually closes up some of the canon's plot holes quite nicely. This one, more then anything else I've read of yours, I want to see more of. Mostly because (it seems to me) you stopes *just* before the *best* part; the confrontation between Ranma/Setsuna and the other Sailors. Well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't mormaly review before I get to the end of a story, but this feels worthwhile even if it's barely a paragraph. "It's one way to join the Schools, I suppose." THAT... THAT is so evil and awesome. It's so EVIL and WICKED, it made me cackle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is interesting. Unfortunately it hasn't been updated in awhile and your likely only half way at best through the story. My only significant suggestion would be that if you do another Ranma/Sailor Moon crossover you may want to leave Ranma without a past life. Overall though your back story and such was interesting and it would be interesting to see this finished... |
![]() ![]() ![]() seriously, continue these fics, they're too good to be left to rot |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another excellent work Krahae I loved the whole thing set down and read it start to finish. I'm looking forward to the next two interludes a bit, however, I'm really looking forward to the meeting between Ranma, Setsuna, and the Senshi. Please return and continue, and Thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank heavens - you didn't use the word "moaned" even once in this chapter. |
![]() ![]() an interesting idea and written quite well. unfortunately just as it was getting to all of the interesting character interactions you gave us a worthless chapter and then stopped writing. disappointing. |