Reviews for Eclipsed |
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![]() ![]() ![]() cool story love the plot very different from the norm ive read hope u update again some day |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is simply amazing, I found it earlier today and could not stop reading it. I had to push my work till tomorrow. The attention to detail in refreshing. After reading quite a few stories more to pass the time then anything, it was quite a shock. From Ranma taking control of his life and sorting out his problems, to Queen Serenity not being the complete purely good being, you have covered all the bases. The chapter lengths are a great match they are not short which is good to keep the flow of the story going, but not too long since some people can lose interest. The only problem is the story has not been updated since 2011, please continue with this story. Keep up all the great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Delightful crossover full of dark passion and relentless fury. The mysterious past and hidden agenda is slowly uncovered with tantalizing bits of information, rationed as the story progresses. The shards of unveiled knowledge drive my desire to keep reading. I love this alternate version of Sailor Moon canon where there is no black and white, just shades of grey driving the motivations of the characters. Ranma has no alliance or obligation to submit to the rule of Serenity (Usagi) and as the plot has set him up to be, he is the last hope the spirit of the planet has to resist Serenity. My hope is the story finds a good stopping point before it dies but even if no more chapters are written and is up to us (the readers) to imagine the ending, what we have here is highly enjoyable and fun to read. Thank you for the long hours you have spent into the creation of this tale. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So when is this going to be continued? _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow, has really been over a year since this was updated? I'm going over some of my favorite Ranma fics so as to get some inspiration to write my own... and when I came across this one, well, I was just surprised on how long it's been. Well, thanks for writing this, hope to see more someday, bye for now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and do hope you continue it soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I really hope you have not abandoned this fic, I have noted the update pattern and it seems this is on hiatus... as are most of your other stories, last update being 4-17-11. I'll glide on how much I REALLY liked this story, only to convey my strong request to update it! Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really awesome. i cant wait to see what happens next. will ranma become the guardian of terra AND sailor earth (but not a fuku uniform, rather a real uniform like Susanoomon from the 4th season of digimonlooks reaally cool) please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story! i can't wait for the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sooooooo very good. I can't wait for the next arc. I'm VERY interested. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Personally I like that the queen was as flawed as anyone. Heck. Sometimes i feel Usagi is an idiot too. A caring one but seriously naive. Nice story. Added to watchlist. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are your stories still in the works? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. The detail in the backgrounds of the characters is amazing. Please update soon. I want to see the confrontation between the rest of the senshi and Pluto and Ranma. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice story can't wait for next chapter. As for Serenity as they say history is written by the victor (or at least the one still standing at the end of the day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You really don't see too many d'awww stories this heartfelt, and especially not with this particular pairing. As I've just inhaled the entire story in about four hours, I don't really have anything to say besides how very much I have enjoyed it and look forward to more. However, I really feel the need to comment on how well you craft different scenes. Fight scenes and romance are difficult, and most authors who are good at one... not so much at the other. You are amazing at both. Of special note has to be the short little scene of the Senshi watching Ryouga and Ranma fight. While brief, it was downright masterful in conveying what a witness must experience watching them in Cloverfield style. It sticks out as a cut above the rest, which is especially impressive in an already exemplary story. Fav'd, and looking forward to more. ~Jans |