Reviews for Eclipsed
erikalikesfire chapter 13 . 6/2/2011
It's nice to see an author who pays attention to perspective instead of switching viewpoint characters and dipping into omniscient every other line. Good mix of dialogue and action, with enough setting to give the reader a frame but not so much they get bored. I'm also pleased to see that the slant against Serenity is the characters', not yours. And I really appreciate you marking the interlude as currently optional reading.

Favorite line? "Talking ain't a free action!" I clapped.

Interesting story, really good writing.
Ashleythetiger chapter 13 . 5/27/2011
nice story so far

cannot wait for the sailor scouts to all meet ranma
ShineX chapter 13 . 5/12/2011
Look forward to more soon :)
ShineX chapter 7 . 5/11/2011
OK, what vow exactly then?...
ShineX chapter 5 . 5/11/2011
interesting, nicely done :)
ShineX chapter 3 . 5/11/2011
Very nicely done :)
ShineX chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
hmmm, don't know about the erasing of memories part, but the rest was awesome lol :)
Taiki chapter 12 . 5/3/2011
I like this story so far. I hope you will have more out soon.
Emeraldfireblade chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
wonderfully polished fic..and its nice to see that Im not the only one who still reads ranma/sailormoon these days
EspyLacopa chapter 9 . 4/21/2011
"Then again, this was Setsuna Meiou – Senshi of Pluto, Guardian of Time, and Overwatch of the Time Gates"

Don't forget! Soldier of Revolution!
Swordchucks chapter 13 . 4/19/2011
This is a very interesting tale. You managed to pull off a Ranma-was-a-senshi story that is very engaging (as many of them aren't). I sincerely hope you find time and motivation to pick this back up.
FaerieKnight197 chapter 13 . 4/17/2011
Hmm, interesting read. Hope it continues.
Ozzallos chapter 10 . 4/15/2011
Mmmm... Setsy.

Well written as tends to be the apparent trend for your fics. My only serious gripe is the steep character OC and heavy plot curve that chapter eight brings. I love my scifi plots and Ranma-chan, but the chapter eight gradient is a pretty harsh one on both. Could probably used another chapter or two with Ranma coping. Otherwise great fun.
addicted2text chapter 13 . 4/15/2011
Considering this has not been updated since February and here I am just discovering this in April, I just wanted to drop you a line of encouragement and say that this is one of the best Ranma Sailor Moon crossovers I've seen in recent memory. I really hope to see more in the next few weeks as you get the next arc started. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Kit the Fiendish Fire Cat chapter 13 . 4/9/2011
I...I'm simply in love with your style of writing!

I just...started reading and couldn't stop...I should've stopped due to how late it was, but I couldn't!

I'm...simply at a loss for words. If I had the words to give...to accurately describe my feelings...well, they'd be positive words! Very positive!

This is One of the Best SM/Ranma crossovers I've ever read! It certainly left me with a want for more!

Signed,

Kit the (In love) Fiendish Fire Cat~!
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