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![]() ![]() ![]() It's nice to see an author who pays attention to perspective instead of switching viewpoint characters and dipping into omniscient every other line. Good mix of dialogue and action, with enough setting to give the reader a frame but not so much they get bored. I'm also pleased to see that the slant against Serenity is the characters', not yours. And I really appreciate you marking the interlude as currently optional reading. Favorite line? "Talking ain't a free action!" I clapped. Interesting story, really good writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story so far cannot wait for the sailor scouts to all meet ranma |
![]() ![]() ![]() Look forward to more soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK, what vow exactly then?... |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting, nicely done :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nicely done :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmmm, don't know about the erasing of memories part, but the rest was awesome lol :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story so far. I hope you will have more out soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderfully polished fic..and its nice to see that Im not the only one who still reads ranma/sailormoon these days |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Then again, this was Setsuna Meiou – Senshi of Pluto, Guardian of Time, and Overwatch of the Time Gates" Don't forget! Soldier of Revolution! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very interesting tale. You managed to pull off a Ranma-was-a-senshi story that is very engaging (as many of them aren't). I sincerely hope you find time and motivation to pick this back up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, interesting read. Hope it continues. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mmmm... Setsy. Well written as tends to be the apparent trend for your fics. My only serious gripe is the steep character OC and heavy plot curve that chapter eight brings. I love my scifi plots and Ranma-chan, but the chapter eight gradient is a pretty harsh one on both. Could probably used another chapter or two with Ranma coping. Otherwise great fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Considering this has not been updated since February and here I am just discovering this in April, I just wanted to drop you a line of encouragement and say that this is one of the best Ranma Sailor Moon crossovers I've seen in recent memory. I really hope to see more in the next few weeks as you get the next arc started. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I...I'm simply in love with your style of writing! I just...started reading and couldn't stop...I should've stopped due to how late it was, but I couldn't! I'm...simply at a loss for words. If I had the words to give...to accurately describe my feelings...well, they'd be positive words! Very positive! This is One of the Best SM/Ranma crossovers I've ever read! It certainly left me with a want for more! Signed, Kit the (In love) Fiendish Fire Cat~! |