|Reviews for Making Tracks|
| KenDORK772 chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
yes you brought it back :)!
update don't delete!
| Awsm sauce chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
I think that this story has gone to the author's head. It lacks originality. For me a story should drag you in within the first page. In this case it does quite the opposite. It seems that your inspiration has derived from watching too many chick-flicks.
Word of advice if you want REAL criticism. Don't expect it to be nice. This book will not get published, if J.K Rowling gets rejected several times before her success, you have no chance.
The "AN", just portrays you as someone on a high horse.
| Emma123xZero chapter 4 . 2/26/2011
Love you charl :)
I'm so glad you decided to put it back on, clearly your a bigger person than any of those malicious wankers:)
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