Reviews for Afraid Of The Dark
the-lovely-anomaly chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
Before discovering you, I never saw this pairing working. Never in a million years. But your work is astounding. You have real talent - publishable talent, I'd go so far as to say. Keep writing. Keep these stories up. Usually I'm not much for romance; however, you are an exception.

Since coming across your stories, I can honestly say that I have now become a fan of Lawrence and Adam as a couple. I firmly believe that practically any pairing on FF can work so long as it is backed up by good writing...which you always supply.

Well done. I shall be reading your other stories.
GodGudKami chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
AW! I never get tired of hurt/comfort! Why are you so screwed up, Adam? I think it's because he likes the attention! XD Well, okay, that's not fair. His mom was obviously a nut-case (XD). She reminds me a bit of the crazy mother in Carrie. Maybe Adam will get psychic powers and go on a killing spree, too? How fun. _ Anyway, AW! Poor scarred, delicate little Adam... Why can't Lawrence stay over all the time? I'm guessing he might have been stupid in this AU, too, and made Diana. If so, I really wanna kick him. XD He'll always be there to comfort Adam, though (well, except in Adam Faulkner's Afterlife, but even then he still comforted Adam in his dreams _), so it'll be all right. I'm guessing the two had wild, angsty sex after Lawrence finished comforting Adam, am I right? XD
Sammy07 chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
AW! This was so CUTE! I don't know why Adam doesn't just sell that house so he doesn't have all those traumatic memories, but I guess if he didn't there'd be no story. XD Poor Adam. He always gets bad parents and awful childhoods, doesn't he? Well, that's his fault for being so adorable when he's angsty and in need of comfort. _ It's so cute how Lawrence came over to comfort him, too! Sure, he didn't really have a lot of options, but seeming as the whole thing is his fault... Well, okay, it's not his fault. It's his whacko mother's, but still. XD
nicoleb chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
YARGH! That was so freaking ADORABLE! I don't know where you got this idea from, but it's awesome! XD AW! I love how Adam is gripping the phone as he talks to Lawrence! And how Lawrence tries to comfort him over the phone and then realizes he has to come over for real, since you can't really have comfort-sex over the phone. ...Or can you? XD And wow... I thought I hated Adam's father in We'll Get There Someday, but he's a saint compared to Adam's mother in this! Poor Adam! Why does he always have to get homophobic parents? XD
Ready Or Notxx chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
EEEEEK! This is soooo cuuuute! :D This is one of the best things you've written! This is adorable! Childlike Adam always gets me...
Jenny7 chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
I love this! It does have that horror feel to it but at the same time its romantic and completely Adam and Lawrence. And I have to say that I always enjoy reading your stories because you really are a talented writer. As always, I look forward to the next one. :)

And I hope your teacher gave you an A or else we'll have to send Jigsaw to teach them a lesson! :P
ScaryElwes chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Awww! So adorable! I love how you completely changed the circumstance in which our two lovebirds got together, but you still kept that purity and trust that makes their relationship so special..

Lovely job. :D