Reviews for The Legend of Spyro: Everlasting Darkness
Dragonoc chapter 16 . 2/5/2013
dude hurrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyy up with next chapter, right now im on the edge of a cliff hanging from a branch that just snapped a little. please hurry!
Guest chapter 4 . 12/3/2012
I think it a piety good story
Guest chapter 2 . 10/24/2012
has hunter turned evil
The Dragon 1000 chapter 12 . 7/12/2011
what, no self conflictions? you're forgetful
The 5th Dragon Guardian chapter 11 . 7/4/2011
Nice job so far
The Dragon 1000 chapter 11 . 6/25/2011
r&r means read & review.
Xx-Starduster-xX chapter 10 . 6/8/2011
Nice story, keep up the good work!
The Dragon 1000 chapter 10 . 6/7/2011
why'd you share that. it was unneeded
The Dragon 1000 chapter 9 . 5/28/2011
"now let use,"... what? "Cynder had way overstepped" really?

and turkey glue?
The Dragon 1000 chapter 6 . 4/30/2011
you spelled 'follow' wrong again
The Dragon 1000 chapter 5 . 4/24/2011
there is more bad regards to grammer. question marks, right word usage, and plurals.

and why didn't the fly up to the top of the staircase?
Cynder fan chapter 4 . 4/17/2011
Good start for a first time. The seasoned veterans will complain if you make a mistake (trust me. I know.) but as long as we can read it most of us won't care. Just 1 tip. Sparx has an x not a ks.

Looking forward to next chapter.

Cynderfan out.
The Dragon 1000 chapter 4 . 4/15/2011
i like correcting you.

1: You spelled follow wrong it should be f-o-l-l-o-w, not f-A-l-l-o-w

2: until does not have an E at the end

UNTIL nextime, FOLLOW me, the Secret Organization of Cats (SOC)
The Dragon 1000 chapter 3 . 3/27/2011
i wish ziznamite was real. maybe it is what you get if you fuse Zirconium with Kryptonium. eh... just a thought
The Dragon 1000 chapter 2 . 3/1/2011

epic actually means "sufficiently more/greater"

you could say "my skills are epic" meaning your skills are sufficiently greater than most

or you could say "that was an epic fail" meaning that the fail was sufficiently more than a normal failure.

and there is still mis-spellings and grammer erros, but you skills are getting better. they are not epic, though.
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