Reviews for Adrenaline
gleeruinedmylife chapter 11 . 8/2/2011
oh how i love emily/spencer parings. i just truely enjoy reading this
c opps22 chapter 11 . 7/13/2011
keep going don't leeve it there!
Mestizaa chapter 11 . 7/6/2011
Just recently found this story... Hell, I just recently got onto prentiss/Reid fics. This story is only intensifying my love for them. Especially bad ass Emily. I hope to see an update soon :)
justificati0n chapter 11 . 7/6/2011
Eh I've been waiting so long for the next chapter.

I want more of this story ;_; I love it!

Please please write more soon if you're not too busy xD

It's definitely one of the best ones I've ever read. :3
Wolfybaby chapter 11 . 6/13/2011
I don't usually like tics where someone is pregnant, but this is pretty good. I'd just like to see a bit more of the team... Anyway, I'm interested to see more.
SpemilyFan chapter 11 . 6/4/2011
Great chapter!
lpearson chapter 10 . 6/3/2011
I love this story! Thank you for writing this! Excited for more.
ShaNini86 chapter 11 . 6/3/2011
The dream sequence you've used is a wonderful, subconscious reminder of everything Emily could have, but can't presently. I also can't help but feel that Emily also ran away from the team, and from Reid, because she needed to keep everyone safe, get Doyle, and because she doesn't know how to let anyone help her and she's truly petrified of letting anyone see her too much. I think you did a really good job showing that here. The phone conversation between Reid and Emily was heartbreaking. You have a way with poignant, in character dialogue. I'm sad I don't have any more chapters to read now, but I'm very glad I read more of this story. Also, you wrote about MT and its scattered, desolate towns so well that it kind of made sense when I read in your AN that you worked in a park. It just fit, if that doesn't sound too strange...

I can't wait to read new additions. :)
ShaNini86 chapter 10 . 6/3/2011
Oh my, this chapter was a whirlwind. I can literally feel Reid's paralyzing shock. His worries, confusions, memories, and anxieties are so palpable that I felt lightheaded and nervous for him. Your dialogue is realistic, especially Morgan's. Reid's rebuttal to Morgan is somewhat off character, but not unrealistic given the situation. I'm interested to see if Morgan puts Reid's erratic behavior and Emily's pregnancy together...

I love where this is going!
ShaNini86 chapter 9 . 6/3/2011
First of all, I did not see Emily calling Garcia at all. You have definitely surprised me and now I'm totally wondering if Garcia's known this whole time that Emily's alive. That would be an interesting twist...

And I really like how Emily's romanticizing her night with Spencer and trying to make it, as she puts it in this chapter, more emotional than it was. I don't know if you wrote her in denial or if this is just my perception, but the night seemed very emotional. Sometimes, when we really want to believe something with all our hearts, when we really want to lie to ourselves, we pretend that something that meant everything really meant nothing. It's a warped form of protection, and I think that's what you did here. If not, let's pretend my little analysis never happened...

As always, beautiful job. The claustrophobic sense is coming through and I'm definitely invested into your well-crafted plot. :)
ShaNini86 chapter 8 . 6/3/2011
I love the push and pull you have between self/inner reflection and plot movement. It's hard to make this so sudden, yet believable, and you do so seamlessly. The plot flows with a quiet realization or, in this case, Reid spotting Emily. You write with longer sentences, but it's your shorter ones that become the crux of your themes. I love this one: "... he can't go back in time, and he feels so god damned lost because of it."

Nice job once again :)
vampiremuggle chapter 11 . 6/3/2011
so sad! i just about cried when reid said, "i don't want to lose the chance to meet my own child." update soon please! can't wait to read more!

~Vampiremuggle

vampiremuggle at gmail dot com
Greg'sgirl5 chapter 11 . 6/3/2011
OHMYGOD HURRY UP WITH ANOTHER CHAPTER!
ShaNini86 chapter 7 . 6/3/2011
I love how the reality of everything his Emily in this chapter and how she admits she doesn't really have a plan. There's some subtle, yet needed, humor here and it really helps break the intensity of the situation. This line cracked me up:"Can she really be drawing her weapon when faced with an opponent if she's got an infant in a Baby Bjorn strapped to her chest?"

I love where this is heading!
ShaNini86 chapter 6 . 6/3/2011
I love how Reid keeps secrets, even if they seem trivial, like the way his knee hurts after long periods of rest. Or, worse, his headaches. And, even professionally, how he recognizes at some level that Emily's been there by the Lauren Reynolds memory. It's interesting that you show this trait on so many levels, but it's also very telling of the character we see on the show. Nice job with this detail.
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