Reviews for Unlikely Dou
ryuryu77 chapter 2 . 3/18
actually when you get to immortal student in the series there is valid evidence of Kyo not only being able to but being willing to take a swing at someone when pushed hard enough.
and he's not a complete wuss, Kyo's kind of like the Zombieland out for number one wuss who's unwilling to stick his neck out to far in fear it'll get chewed off.
add in the fact that by episode...10 i think, the one with the crow-man cybot, (or the end of it at least) Kyo and Jo seemed to have developed a certain level of friendship your one shot plots seem plausible.
also, last note, anyone who watched the whole series and the OVA will probably agree with me on this, while Meg is obviously romantically invested in Jo, it looks like Jo is just repaying a debt by protecting her until she could protect herself.
all in all, despite the unlikelihood of the event, i wish you would post some more one-shots cause these were good in my mind
Guest chapter 2 . 3/12/2016
Well it's not bad but needs more chapters
Guest chapter 2 . 9/30/2015
Oh please update! You have no idea how hard it is to find good fics of this pairing. I'M BEGGING YOU! UPDATE!
simeon234 chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
Nerf585 chapter 1 . 10/10/2014
dude finish the f**kin story it's goin good so far
Torento chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
This was a decent story, not the best story I've ever read, but it was interesting and you said this wasn't your best story anyway so I understand. What really interested me was your description of yourself as a writer at the bottom. I also use Jo Carpenter as the character inspiration for many of my characters in different, original works. She's like an actress that I use because her name and appearance remain the same, but her character could be anything from a super weapon to a librarian from a cop to a little kid. The sleeping together thing was very cute, although I don't know how romantic that is if all they did was sleep. I'm glad you had them just sleep, though. Screwing around probably would've been to much. You really captured the idea of teenagers very well.

I'm guessing you're probably a teenager yourself. I noticed you didn't have any comments, but you made a damn good Burst Angel story and I thought you deserved at least one comment. I myself have not made much Fanfiction either. I have written around sixty stories in the last year ranging from 5 to 37 pages, from 1200 words to 14510 words after editing. I have made Super Smash Brothers, Aliens, Lord of the Rings and Burst Angel Fanfiction stories. I also have Full Metal Alchemist, Star Wars and James Bond stories planned to write later.
Lowar chapter 2 . 11/20/2012
I love this fic! Please, I beg you to ignore the flames and keep writing(though perhaps with more cute romance like in the first chapter _)
D.Serigale chapter 2 . 8/29/2012
Love it MUCH better than MegJo. ESP since Meg is such a XXXXX.
that guy chapter 2 . 7/21/2012
great so far cant wait to see next chapter
soulstar 1337 chapter 2 . 6/17/2012
i dont see why people would send you hate mail i think it totally rocks and i really want to see the next part really bad. p.s. dont listen to those people who are sending hate mail.
XFallenAngelXxX chapter 2 . 6/15/2012
Hmm, personally, I really do like the pairing. I don't know why these people always put Meg with Jo. I mean, they're best friends, sure, but lovers? Isn't that a bit much? Anyway, I hope you keep writing for this. It's really good. Also, just ignore the hate mail. If they don't like it, they don't like it. Not like they have to keep on reading. I don't get why they keep on reading if they didn't like the first one. They don't have to, but they still read something they don't like. Oops, I think I ranted a bit. Sorry. Anyway, keep up the good work!
kyohei x jo fan chapter 2 . 4/16/2012
i need more
Mwu Kai chapter 2 . 3/20/2012
Honestly I like both stories. To hell with what everybody else wants, it's your show right? On a more serious strand I think the way you depicted Kyo in the first was pretty gutsy. Umm there was an episode where he had a childhood friend and that friend talked about how much balls Kyo had. I remember specifically that the guy said Kyo did something that the other trouble makers wouldn't do and he respected Kyo for that. The fact that your first story revolved around that gutsy part of Kyo gave him a fresh feel in my opinion. (Personally I think he's pretty cool for an average dude.)

As for the second story I am quite curious as to how things will turn out. I don't know if it was on purpose but the stories feel as though they loosely revolve around one another. The only thing is that it feels as though Jo and Kyo's relationship in the first escalated to a point but then 'reset' in the second story. (If that makes sense) My questions:

Are these two chapters progression in their relationship?

Will Jo keep Amy, Meg, and Sei out of the loop with what's going on in the next chapter?

Does Kyo get a gun or weapon? (That would be quite funny and fun at the same time)

Well, keep up the great work!
Shinsou Kanashimi chapter 2 . 1/13/2012
Well really good set of one shots here.. But is this on hold? Anyways yeah I thought both were really good, may be a sequel for the first? Or a extended scene from the room? (No not lemon ok I'm a guy but I'm not someone who just here for lemons... Unless there are written well :D). So until next (maybe?).


Just me and myself chapter 2 . 1/4/2012
These are really cool!
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