|Reviews for Salvation|
| Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
Very good poem about admission of sins and God's mercy.
| Agnostic chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
Your God has forsaken you. Welcome to hell.
| gloriousanon chapter 1 . 2/27/2003
That's really good! Very good.
| Jennifer Jolie chapter 1 . 4/20/2002
Amen. God bless.
| Denizen1 chapter 1 . 3/29/2002
*Your poem from God's perspective*
Human, have mercy
Upon my existence,
Forgive me of my crimes
And punish me for them.
I know I do not exist, on my own, so I must have You as my make.
I have cursed Your ancestors
I have killed so many of You
I have not saved you from this darkness
And joy in my black heart You cannot fill.
You loved me so much
That You fell down and worshiped me
You knew you shouldn't do it
I made laws against idols,
Now I'm the hyporcrete.
Now that I'm cursed by You
Now that I cease to exist
I will descend into the Hell I created for You
And You will be free of me.
| Jenny Y chapter 1 . 3/27/2002
I love all your poems, and this was as good as the rest.
| Fayra chapter 1 . 3/24/2002
Thats great...I know the feeling that you put in your poetry...it was very good.
| Sparky chapter 1 . 3/24/2002
Thank you. Truly, thank you.