Reviews for Loving a Mortal |
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![]() ![]() This story is quite brilliant. The relationships portrayed here are portrayed so uniquely, and you can really feel what the nations are going through. Each chapter gets more heartbreaking. I know it's been a long time and all, but part of me hopes to see an update to this story; it's definitely worth the wait. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait this is like the movie called Mulan? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the idea of countries falling in love with their citizens:3 The humans you picked were quite wonderful as well. Just, uh, a few seem to be out of character... In Mulan's era, for example, people would not have been so forward. Jus' sayin'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I reread this and I had forgotten how good and enjoyable it was. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dem it... QAQ Why... :( THAT'S SO UNFAIR! DAMN OUR WORLDS HISTORY! Damn it... *cries hard* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love these stories so much! All those stories made me want to cry, they are so awesome! You NEED to continue this! I love the idea! If you are having writer's block, maybe you could try something for the countries you did not touch on yet like Germany, Japan, or even Canada! Please write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() God bless you Joan! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This by far the most SADDEST AND TOUCHING thing that I ever read! Bless you, Joan! Bless you! I also feel sorry for the others. |
![]() ![]() This is by far, my most favorite one, and the most touching story I ever heard! Take good care of her God! |
![]() ![]() Oh Amelia! Where are you? |
![]() ![]() VERY VERY VERRRRRY TOUCHING! I cried a little. |
![]() ![]() ![]() TT I feel bad for China |
![]() ![]() Can I Ask This? Im also a writer in another writing page and i was wondering if i can feature this story and ill give you the credits to it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not an expert or anything, so free to disagree, but I just have a small problem with your Chinese. You don't need to use xiao in front of didi. Xiao means small in relation to size, it can't be used to mean younger, and didi already means younger brother. Also, isn't aniki Japanese? Gege means older brother is Mandarin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...*tears* QAQ So sad but so amazing... |