Reviews for Loving a Mortal |
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![]() ![]() ![]() D; POOR ITALY! His lover died. These stories are depressing but yet soo good~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh D: sadnessssssssss... You didn't base it off the Disney one did you? O_e |
![]() ![]() ![]() T_T S-stop it! Damn, I'm supposed to be doing homework right now! (Actually, for the past couple of hours... "orz) This was, as I say for each of your chapters, beautiful! It was very sweet and I got lost in it from the very beginning. Poor Yao though, realizing that it was a dream. But good thing too, otherwise we wouldn't have Mulan, one of THE MOST badass Disney girls EVER! Great work, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Good luck with Russia or Italy! Are we going to get a serious Italy for once? *really excited* probably not... "orz. Would be cool, though. :D *~yaoiforever666~* |
![]() ![]() ![]() sorry if my english is bad... It's not my language i really do love this fic. I hope u will update soon... Anyway, i want to request! I want Romano! I suggest with silvia di siervi or pamela sabato... I'm so glad if u want to... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kage: Dang it! You made me think Mulan actually existed at first! DX I now I feel bad that China realizes that it was all just a dream. And now he can only remember her through that ballad. So...friggen...sad! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it [L] |
![]() ![]() ![]() These stories do make sense, that nations would love some of their finest citizens. So, to you, legends that might have been real, are the nation's dreams? That's a interesting concept, and fits really well with Hetalia. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Yao :s Thats so sad! D: Little Kiku was adorable . Great chapter :-) Eternally Yours, Bee |
![]() ![]() ![]() Genius idea |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH SNAP! I was right about Amelia Earhart! *whoops and pumps fist in air* B-but... it was so sad... T_T Poor Al... Can't wait for China! Mulan? *doesn't know jack-shit about China thanks to a sucky 7th grade history teacher* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kage: Shoot! Missed two chapters! D8 Well, time review! I was eagerly awaiting France's chapter because I thought it would come out heart-rendering. And it turns out I was right! Poor France having a front seat view... ;-; Now for America's, I was surprised that you used Amelia Earhart for this. Then again, she pretty much fits his adventurous side. You set a really good relationship between the two and the part where America gets the feeling she would die...that was...I can't describe it. I can't wait to see who China is paired up with! |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor al :D it all ends in heart break D: poops :) do china next~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() The way you described Amelia, she is the perfect woman for Alfred! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww this one is one of my favorites. Well actually I love them all! But I love Amelia Earhart alot and because of that I enjoyed this chapter. I can't wait to see who you are using for the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Alfred. We all really lost our pilot. She's one of my role models. Such a shame she died. [ But please update! |