Reviews for Happy Birthday, Bella
Maybe chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Honestly, if you plan to expand this out I wish you'd take out any mention of Edward. I stopped reading immediately when he was mentioned and skipped to the author note instead. It's one of those things, you know? In my mind, if either of them are in a fic, they should be together. End of. It might help, I don't know. I liked what little I read though. Despite my weirdness, I DO like other pairings and this contest had some nice stories that I'd be interested in reading more of.
Just Sus chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Sorry, but this is a "no" for me...
marigold123 chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
I enjoyed your o/s. It was sweet, funny and sexy. I cracked up over Mike saying he didn't go through Bella's underwear drawer. Edward, the BFF. Kate and Bella not coming out to Edward. Enjoyed
HopelessRomantic79 chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Wow, that was hot! But I couldn't help but wonder if that was hard for you to write... I mean... Yeah. You know what I mean...

I've never read Kate/Bella before but I liked it!
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