Reviews for Dangerous Fever
Guest chapter 6 . 9/2
I really do not like this Olympias at all. Yuck!
Guest chapter 4 . 8/27
You make Olympias truly creepy here. Lysis
Guest chapter 3 . 8/27
A microwave blew up and took out half the room! Ha, ha! Love it!. Great scene in the park! Lysis
Guest chapter 2 . 8/27
I like the sarcastic humor of this, esp., that of Alex and Phai. Lysis
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27
I feel like I'm watching a scene from The Godfather reading this. I liked the line where Phai congratulates himself on cleverly seducing Alex's leg. Lysis
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
Bro, this shit is CRAZY! I love it though, honest and true. Cool shit! Hesphaestion is a Boss!
Guest chapter 16 . 3/4/2013
damn! thought the july october in the first chapter was just typo , stupid me!
tears T-T
Guest chapter 8 . 3/4/2013
the soft and very loving side of Alex at the end again, get your Phai back and soon!pls!
Guest chapter 5 . 3/4/2013
gosh, your elevator scene is even hotter than actual sex!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/4/2013
the POVs are magnificent! can't stop laughing when reading the chasing scene, and the last two paragraph? oh my my! I love your freakish Alex and Phai just so damn much!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
the two are indeed crazy! and I loooove them!
this story seems to be something really special, and you! must be some writer truly great!
heyo chapter 12 . 1/16/2013
I just looooove "your" Hephaistion :) he isn't just a little schoolkid who's always nice and shy and cute and stuff he's a man and of course he has his bad sides but that's why I am so enthusiastic bout him
Laura chapter 3 . 1/11/2013
jesus I'm so glad I discovered you and your awesome stories! you're an amazing writer and I had to laugh so hard when I read this chapter, I just can't stop reading! Your sence of humour is great and I really hope you never stop writing :)
alicemair chapter 16 . 6/10/2012
I discovered this story just lastnite, I found it fantastic, I didnt even have time to review because I couldnt stop reading.I've just finished it.

I'd have liked to know how Alex and Phai are proceeding with their ghostly life. It would have been very interesting too if you made them haunt Parmen and his son.
Mistress of Nightmares chapter 16 . 9/3/2011
Okay so I've been meaning to review this for ages but I'm awful at reviews and lazy, so... lol

Well, I absolutely LOVED this, I've re-read it so many times. Haha I love mob/gang AUs in general and this in particular was so well done. I love the really off vibe this has with things like the incest and Alexander just never dying, and right down to the little things like him drinking mouth wash and stuff like that. And as you said, the simplified writing style you use definitely does serve to highlight this vibe with the juxtaposition of the short and simple sentences with their insane behaviour.

And my favorite aspect would have to be the Alexander/Hephaistion dynamic of absolutely fucking hating each other and being in love at the same time. That kind of dynamic is fascinating to me and, of course, it's also hilarious. lol

The closing scene is perfect, and I love the ending/twist. imo it's the sort of thing you just have to understand the general idea of and not the finer workings - kind of like Inception. lol

So, this was absolutely awesome and I hope you update the sequel soon. :)
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