|Reviews for Dangerous Fever|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
Bro, this shit is CRAZY! I love it though, honest and true. Cool shit! Hesphaestion is a Boss!
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/4/2013
damn! thought the july october in the first chapter was just typo , stupid me!
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/4/2013
the soft and very loving side of Alex at the end again, get your Phai back and soon!pls!
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/4/2013
gosh, your elevator scene is even hotter than actual sex!
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/4/2013
the POVs are magnificent! can't stop laughing when reading the chasing scene, and the last two paragraph? oh my my! I love your freakish Alex and Phai just so damn much!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
the two are indeed crazy! and I loooove them!
this story seems to be something really special, and you! must be some writer truly great!
| heyo chapter 12 . 1/16/2013
I just looooove "your" Hephaistion :) he isn't just a little schoolkid who's always nice and shy and cute and stuff he's a man and of course he has his bad sides but that's why I am so enthusiastic bout him
| Laura chapter 3 . 1/11/2013
jesus I'm so glad I discovered you and your awesome stories! you're an amazing writer and I had to laugh so hard when I read this chapter, I just can't stop reading! Your sence of humour is great and I really hope you never stop writing :)
| alicemair chapter 16 . 6/10/2012
I discovered this story just lastnite, I found it fantastic, I didnt even have time to review because I couldnt stop reading.I've just finished it.
I'd have liked to know how Alex and Phai are proceeding with their ghostly life. It would have been very interesting too if you made them haunt Parmen and his son.
| Mistress of Nightmares chapter 16 . 9/3/2011
Okay so I've been meaning to review this for ages but I'm awful at reviews and lazy, so... lol
Well, I absolutely LOVED this, I've re-read it so many times. Haha I love mob/gang AUs in general and this in particular was so well done. I love the really off vibe this has with things like the incest and Alexander just never dying, and right down to the little things like him drinking mouth wash and stuff like that. And as you said, the simplified writing style you use definitely does serve to highlight this vibe with the juxtaposition of the short and simple sentences with their insane behaviour.
And my favorite aspect would have to be the Alexander/Hephaistion dynamic of absolutely fucking hating each other and being in love at the same time. That kind of dynamic is fascinating to me and, of course, it's also hilarious. lol
The closing scene is perfect, and I love the ending/twist. imo it's the sort of thing you just have to understand the general idea of and not the finer workings - kind of like Inception. lol
So, this was absolutely awesome and I hope you update the sequel soon. :)
| Gif chapter 16 . 5/14/2011
O_O Mental disease? Apparent death? I each of them in the other's dream? Drugs? Is it a videogame? You really left me puzzled!
| purple lolly chapter 16 . 5/10/2011
I Like this story, nobody said it has to be set in anicent times so weldone you
| S0phea chapter 16 . 5/10/2011
Yeah...I'm confused too. I noticed the difference in dates in chapter 1 long time ago but I thought it was only a typo. That's the only thing I can came up with.
Can you please explain this chapter to me because I have read Dangerous Fever 2 and I am still lost. :P
By the way, thanks for the story.
| angstman chapter 16 . 5/10/2011
Okay..i am more confused..So did they die? are they a ghost? more and more confused now ...but at least,..Phai is safe from Parmen...thank you :)
| angstman chapter 15 . 5/5/2011
Yes Yes Yes! They made it out alive! you make me so worried for them...and now it is time for revenge! yeah! I hope they will get their revenge and not hurt themselves in a process! Alex is such a brave and cool ! nice update