I greatly enjoy your stories. Nice dialogue...appropriate Danny rants...great characterization and interaction.

Lovely writing:-)

I'm sure I have reviewed the story before but I just wanted to say thank you again for your writing. You were one of the first H50 authors I read quite a few years back and I love your writing style and I love how you write the characters so perfectly. I noticed you haven't written for a long time, but if you're still out there...thank you and if you ever have time to show your talent again through another H Five-O story, I would be the first one to read it

What a great action packed story. Your description of Steve taught...fantastic.

I'm speechless. Calling this amazing is an understatement. The way you intertwined the angst and drama with the humor and rants is so incredibly impressive.

You understand Steve. You understand Danny. Most of all, you understand Steve and Danny. I truly wish you'd start writing H50 stories again. Please! :)

It's really annoying how danny blames everything on steve maybe Its danny that has the bad luck after all his the one who is ALWAYS negative always bitching and also so sick of danny focused fics coming up in steve searches Fanfics killed the danny character thats for sure

Wonderful story! Loved it! :)

I loved this..loved reading Steve's thoughts while searching for Danny.
They truly are brothers..
Great writing!

Nice! Partnership and friendship. Rants and raves, losses and gains. I had to laugh through part of Dannies ranting because it was so funny and comical and so him! I could just see them on the boat and Danny with his hands waving and trying to get the upper hand with his vocabulary...always trying to put Steve in his place; and Steve just looking at him and letting him go at it lol. Another great short story and you definitely have their characters down to a tee! Thank you so much for great reading!

Couldn't sleep tonight so I thought I'd see if I could find a good H5-0 story to keep me company. I found this one and enjoyed reading it very much. I caught myself going, "Aww, they're so cute." Thank you for giving me something to get through a long night and 'sorry' it took me over 2 years to find it.

Freaking hysterical - one of the most true portrayal of the characters I have seen yet and I am sorry it took so long for me to get to it. Bravo!

You are a story-telling, emotion-stirring genius, you. Personally, I hate it when CPR is used in rescue situations, especially when there's no pulse...since statistically, less than 10% of people with no pulse who are administered CPR actually recover, but we're not here to think of this as real life.

Loved that Danny's lines were ever-so-sarcastic. "This is great?" Thank you for this gem, Faye Dartmouth.

That's another one to add to the favorites list. You have a great talent and I'm glad you're sharing it.

Awesome fic.

I would pay cash to see this played out as an ep. To see the gunfight. To experience this dialog... Just awesome in every way. Brava!