Reviews for There Was a Girl
Red Phoenix Dragon chapter 2 . 3/6/2011
A good next chapter but Harry could have befriended Hermione in the first year as they had a common enemy to hide from. Harry could show Hermione some over the magic tricks he had learnt himself. He was very careful that the Dursleys never saw him do it. Being locked in a dark cupboard for days and weeks on end would encourage Harry to want some light then using his will imagine a ball of light floating above the palm of his hand. Then using his will power to imagine the door bolt releasing with a wave of his hand to unlock his cupboard door. He had seen some magic in a movie or TV show where People could slide from place to place and he thought that was very cool and something he needed to get away from Dudley. So he tried to imagine sliding to a spot. He closed his eyes and willed it when he open his eyes he was there. Imagination is without limits.

Thanks for sharing your story. Please update soon.
Me chapter 2 . 3/6/2011
You know, one of the problems with reading a lot of fanfiction is that it starts to become hard to find new fics that come up with new idea(and being a strict Harmonian limits it more). You see a lot of the same basic plots redone over and over in slightly varying ways, which can be fun at times, but can also be a bit tedious if they aren't written extremely well.

I can happily say that this is NOT one of the standard overly-reused plotlines, and so far it's written very well, so I can't wait to read more of it.
Albino87 chapter 2 . 3/6/2011
I like it.

You can rewrite the hole Hogwarts year again and mabey Harry will be able to past Dumbeldores planning and break free from it
Red Phoenix Dragon chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
A sweet story. If Harry had had the courage to befriend Hermione before Hogwarts even just helping each other to hide from the bullies it would have changed every thing at Hogwarts and no Ronald to boot.

Thanks for sharing your story. Please continue to write.
Trakrat chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Continue Please? :D
Purple Flames chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Awwww..very cute, you should really make a sequel! :)

~PF
ASF13957 chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Nice story - the idea is really original. I'm not a Harry/Hermione shipper, but this is cute. It's easy to imagine Hermione as a kid getting gold stars all over her notebook. Great job!
SummerSnowflakes15 chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
Oh dont worry the ending was fine. In fact the whole story was amazing and cute. I love it!
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