Reviews for There Was a Girl
Sherwood374 chapter 7 . 8/30/2012
'The next month almost too quickly for Harry.'

'The next month passed almost too quickly for Harry.'
Sherwood374 chapter 5 . 8/30/2012
"You mean other tan today? An every other day of my life?"

Please re-phrase that sentence, I have no idea what you were trying to say there.

P.S. I only edit stories I like. D
Sherwood374 chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
"The big one, of course. Dudley. I wouldn't call Harry 'his' boy, 'even he does live there'." Hermione was finding this story stranger by the second. Uncle Vernon had yelled at Dudley? According

'even if he does live there'
Sherwood374 chapter 2 . 8/30/2012
But it had. Befriending Hermione changed everything, for both of them. They 'new' spent as much time together as possible. They soon found that working as a team turned 'bully-escaping'


Harry found that he really enjoyed Hermione's company, and according to Mrs. Granger (talking to Mr. Granger while the kids were listening 'as' the keyhole), "Hermione hasn't laughed this

Rori Potter chapter 10 . 8/19/2012
Wow. Update soon.
chris chapter 2 . 8/9/2012
no not everyone is a Narnia obsessed fan,but not everyone can have a perfect memory either,must say i am enjoying the story so far,keep up the great work.
Imsodamnawesomesauce chapter 2 . 8/2/2012
big fan of the chronicles of Narnia but not really a big fan of the silver chair i really dont like that 1 book of the series. but great chapter
karmcmahon chapter 10 . 7/5/2012
Hope you decide to update soon.
devil-in-training chapter 10 . 6/4/2012
you have a really interesting story line here. you should continue
TrueFlamer13 chapter 10 . 5/24/2012
Awesome, keep going!
Amber-Emma chapter 10 . 4/19/2012
well done! great work and some very unexpected turns lik harry and hemione being in ravenclaw, all good all the same though , so, yeah, congrats! - emma 3 xx :) :P
WhiteElfElder chapter 10 . 4/6/2012
Good start. I wonder how long till the secret of Harry's speaking Parsletounge gets out?
happylady chapter 2 . 3/22/2012
Wonderful chapter

Until next time

Quackpotty chapter 10 . 1/21/2012
I've enjoyed the story and look forward to more. Thanks!
noylj chapter 10 . 1/6/2012
Story is very good. However, don't try to rewrite the books. Concentrate on the AU aspects

However, feel free to kill Malfoys, Snapes, and even Bumbles.
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