|Reviews for Sleep|
| AlTHR33 chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
I like the intentionally choppy flow, it worked well with the scenario. So...it doesn't say complete, and you don't say it's a one shot, so it this going to continue? (lame, short review! So uncharacteristic of me!) kay, ciao...
| Windup-Charmer chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
At first, I thought it was Romano who was thinking of suffication, but then I realized it was Feli. I do love how it turned out happy. *claps* And, pasta DOES make everything better. :D
| leader of lights chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
I think this is a nice idea. You're good with (useful) repetition, too! I just feel like this would have a much stronger impact if it was longer. I was left more confused than... whatever emotion you're hoping to get from your reader. I can't imagine North Italy being seriously depressed like this. If you expanded this story, adding more about why he's to the point of suicide, even some examples, you'd get a better reaction. I'm sure. :D