Reviews for If Only You Knew
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 16 . 9/27/2012
I think you rushed through this too fast. It's still good, just too ooc for me.
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 12 . 9/27/2012
There are a few mistakes, though they may be accidental but there is one where you spelled Hermione's name wrong and you forgot the 'c' in Draco.
Guest chapter 12 . 10/17/2011
Why must Draco always shout stupid stuff in the great hall? Kinda OOC... But still , great story.
bearberry915 chapter 10 . 7/19/2011
awwwww... this was so adorable :)
Slytherqueen chapter 16 . 6/17/2011
Hey! This is a fantastic story! :). I'm an IB student from Canada so I know what you mean by the heavy homework load. I just have a few pointers on your story. You tend to have some spelling errors in your story, and a few grammar mistakes. All these things could be easily proofread by yourself or by a beta. I'd be happy to help out as a beta if you like. :D

Despite the slight mistakes, however, I found this story to be a very enjoyable read and I will continue to check out more of your stories!

-Michelle
Slytherqueen chapter 16 . 6/17/2011
Hey! This is a fantastic story! :). I'm an IB student from Canada so I know what you mean by the heavy homework load. I just have a few pointers on your story. You tend to have some spelling errors in your story, and a few grammar mistakes. All these things could be easily proofread by yourself or by a beta. I'd be happy to help out as a beta if you like. :D

Despite the slight mistakes, however, I found this story to be a very enjoyable read and I will continue to check out more of your stories!

-Michelle
Julia Sunshine chapter 13 . 5/31/2011
"sounds like a crazy pairing made up by some bored fan girl someday." - this was funny enough that I had to review even though I had decided I was reviewing anything today. And while I'm reviewing, it's worth saying that I love your story. Its completely awesome. Although I was a little scared for a moment that you'd keep Harry straight. Glad you didnt. Looking forward to the rest of your story. (and dont take it personally if I dont review at the end. I'm working with a broken keyboard, so this review alone took a good ten minutes to write. I love your story whether I write another or not. (: )
Simply.Scarfy chapter 4 . 5/28/2011
Love this chapter. Love this story, I'm reading it for a second time!
Cause4Rebellion chapter 16 . 4/22/2011
OMG! Cutest and saddest and happiest DM/HP story ever! 3
neongreenleaves chapter 16 . 4/21/2011
awww! short, yes, but cute!
Simply.Scarfy chapter 16 . 4/20/2011
Great end to a great story :)
WrathBard chapter 16 . 4/20/2011
sigh the end...Sequel?
WrathBard chapter 15 . 4/18/2011
gasp!

Harry to the rescue! yay
Simply.Scarfy chapter 15 . 4/18/2011
Gah! Update soon pleeease!
Simply.Scarfy chapter 14 . 4/14/2011
Amazing chapter, even if it was on the short side. Godd luck on your tests etc. I can't wait until you can write some more!
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