Reviews for Place For Fear
Lolo.doucet chapter 10 . 2/2/2017
Please continue the story. You're SOgood and you cant leave us like this!
FangirlplusMax2.0 chapter 10 . 8/12/2016
How can you stop. Your good KEEP GOING. I will review regularly. If you KEEP GOING that is.
forever-exist-forever-timeless chapter 10 . 5/10/2016
WHAT! DONT JUST STOP!
brokencrayonsstillcolor chapter 10 . 1/11/2016
uuuuuupppppppppddddddaaaaatttttteeeeeeee
lucybubblychase chapter 10 . 12/26/2015
This story makes me feel all the feels! I've been reading a lot of your stories, and you're an awesome writer! Please don't leave your readers hanging! Is there any chance of you coming back to this story?
FireStarRD chapter 10 . 3/1/2015
I really liked this! Could you please finish the story though, it's been over a year.
FireStarRD chapter 9 . 2/28/2015
No! Max! Don't shut out Fang! DAMIAN AND BRAIN, YOU ARE PAYING FOR THIS! MY ALLIGATOR MINIONS WILL DEFEAT YOU!
FireStarRD chapter 8 . 2/28/2015
I just want to say your writing style is very proffesional, and you should think of turning this into a real book. This is incredible.
FireStarRD chapter 7 . 2/28/2015
Awe!
Riolopolise chapter 10 . 1/13/2015
I really love this, please review soon.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/12/2014
Woah... ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! Your words are like poetry! I love their backgrounds you've made it so complex and it's so amazing! One question though... Is Brian supposed to be a human Dylan? Srry, just wanted to know! Anyways... AWESOME! I absolutely loved it! Hope you continue cuz its amazing! You've got all my love and support!
Winged carpet chapter 10 . 8/7/2014
Hi amazing story please update more and have more Fangs pov thanks
barberry chapter 10 . 8/6/2014
Very good!
thefaultinourducks chapter 10 . 7/28/2014
OMG THIS IS JUST PERF! And yes FPOV would be AWESOMEEEEE! PLZ update ASAP IM DYING :'( :D
hellahijabi chapter 8 . 1/27/2014
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THIS NO DIALOGUE THING IS KILLING ME, LIKE DO YOU REALIZE THAT YOU HAVE LITERALLY TRIED TO SHOW US FANG AND MAX'S EMOTIONS THROUGH ACTIONS, RIGHT? AND THAT IS A GREAT APPROACH BUT THE TEXTING THING IS LIKE RUINING IT. YOU MAKING BEAUTIFUL MOMENTS THAT CAN BECOME HEIGHTENED BY LITTLE ACTIONS NOT WEIRD LONG HEARTFELT TEXTS, YOU NEED TO MAKE THIS SSTORY MORE ABOUT THE BODY LANGUAGE BETWEEN MAX AND FANG AND LESS ABOUT THE AWKWARD TEXING THING THEY HAVE GOING ON. I CANT READ THIS ANYMORE BECAUSE I AM LITERALLY SCREAMING. this is not an attack i just feel every strong not angry or super happy just strong
idk man im so lost. your story is good and your characters are good to (but i feel like your style is suburb and you really have great word choice) but you need thorough characterization for the cast and you need dialogue or at least strong body language to communicate what the heckie is going on -i feel you rely on the texting thing too much and its ruinin it ahhh ok
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