|Reviews for Sand Castles|
| Kangarooney chapter 4 . 1/30
Merlin seems a bit too calm, what with his hand being stabbed to a chair and all...
| wryter501 chapter 8 . 1/3
now this reminds me of x-men, when storm is fighting toad - do you know what happens when a toad is struck by lightning? - the same thing that happen to everything else... that's nice too!
wait for me and we'll both go home together... oh shit, merlin - too beautiful. :D
loved this story - is this the end?
| wryter501 chapter 7 . 1/3
this reminds me of the movie maverick, of alfred molina catching mel gibson - if you hadn't done what you done, i mighta let you live... but now i won't. great lines!
| wryter501 chapter 6 . 1/3
damn - merlin's got some great speeches in your fic - what we all wished he could shout at morgana, just once... her and her self-righteous it's-not-my-fault it's-all-merlin's-fault crap... :)
| wryter501 chapter 4 . 1/3
i like arthur standing up to morgause for merlin, making her wonder if the potion is actually working, if merlin can somehow lie around it... and then accidentally triggering the confession he was trying to prevent... :)
| wryter501 chapter 2 . 1/3
i love your merlin - you've got the snarky side down well - say just the right thing at just the wrong time... :)
| AllieOfGreenGables chapter 8 . 11/13/2013
I do love it when Merlin uses those unspeakably powerful powers he has. Thank you for this. I hipe to see more soon.
| FandomChaser chapter 8 . 11/7/2013
This is really good! Please write an epilogue!
| Amerez chapter 8 . 10/15/2013
As if you were not good at long stories you have a masterpiece right there in front of you!
| mwc288 chapter 8 . 10/6/2013
i think you should make it super long, i'm enjoying it too much for it to end quickly! :) seriously, was a good fight scene. i kind of agree with you on merlin vs. morgause, especially in light of nimueh. i love the lines when merlin realizes arthur's not dead and also that arthur was the one to do it in the end. excellent read!
| Clara Brighet chapter 4 . 9/27/2013
Oohh, this is fun! You have the most creative, original ideas... I love reading your stories!
| CherryAmes15 chapter 8 . 9/25/2013
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/23/2013
Hurray! I am more than happy that you are finishing this. But please don't drag it out forever. End it soon with both the boys surviving and happy. Great last paragraph too!
| Lesley123 chapter 8 . 9/23/2013
Just read your fanfic for the first time. Excellent! Love the powerful Emrys show (and yeah I agree with your comment as how Merlin should have been able to defeat the girls with a swipe of his hand!)
Love the interaction between Merlin and Arthur with the truth potion - Merlins sarcasm is priceless (well done).
Really looking forward to the next update (hint, hint).
| lordtrayus chapter 8 . 9/23/2013
I wouldnt say you arent good at writing fight scenes you did pretty darn well if you ask me