Reviews for first flight
Laura chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Dude, who writes this? It's amazing! I love it!


Percy Jackson, Maximum Ride, and Companion Quartlet Fan!
K8yx chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Its seriously good. I love the ideas. There a few spelling/grammer mistakes but you can easily fix those, or you could get a beta reader. What point of the series is this set? I'm guessing its after but by how many years? I wonder whats going to happen next?
SapphireOceans chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
I really like this idea and I loved this chapter! You're got some really good ideas and I'd be interested to see where you're going to take this :D.

One small issue is that although this is really good, some of your grammar is a little off, so I'd perhaps suggest getting a BETA reader; I'm one myself and wouldn't mind helping out if you wanted, or if not there are some other really good BETA's out there. Just a suggestion :D

Anyway, apart from that, this is awesome, and please update soon, as I'd love to know what's going to happen next!
itsangee chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
oooh i really like it! at what point in the books is it set? hope you update soon!:)

Angelmail x
robert chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
your story is one of my favourites i love how you brought the twist at the end with celestrial