|Reviews for And then suddenly, Ninjas!|
| jcampbellohten chapter 9 . 2/13
Rule of Funny applies to Hiruzen's speech patterns against Akatsuki and Gaara's sudden revelation. Naruto having a jutsu formula on Hinata's ass was also funny. The reveal with Tenten was surprising and original, and her reasoning for that was kind of funny, too.
I don't expect more of this to ever come, but I would read it if it did.
| jcampbellohten chapter 5 . 2/13
As funny as Sakura being a huge flirt is, when it comes to pregnancy and older teenagers staring at her butt and otherwise being attracted to her, it's important to remember that she's TWELVE, at most, which makes those kind of lines not so much funny as impossible/squicky. Sai's sexual harassment was only made funny by the revelation that he'd expected a penis.
Haha, that's one way to skip past the first test! I like it when authors come up with original sneaky stuff for Naruto or whomever to do, but this works, too.
| kabs9000 chapter 9 . 1/20
| J.E.P 1996 chapter 1 . 12/31/2016
Fuck! I love this!
| kareso chapter 9 . 11/21/2016
Hay I just got done reading this story it was really good story please update if u can
| Salome Maranya chapter 3 . 9/15/2016
Sai is an adorable social dunderhead. Nice twist.
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 9 . 7/21/2016
Nice, knowing Sarutobi from this universe, he gives Temari to Naruto and Sakura gets pisses to compete...he wins, COMPLETELY:-)
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/12/2016
What's up with Naruto's glasses, or rather him having them? And why does he spend so much time adjusting them, almost seems like a nervous tick.
Sasuske - Sasuke
waft from Temari's body - waft from Tenten's body
| Ibskib chapter 8 . 7/12/2016
A mangled sentence or two etc:
You rather took a chance than ran - You took a chance instead of running
that by with an idiot way - that with an idiotic way
attrention - attention
| Ibskib chapter 7 . 7/12/2016
I really can't get used to Sakura calling Ino swine instead of pig, it seems much more insulting, and always feel like fighting words to me, much worse than Ino calling her forehead, creating a bit of cognitive dissonance.
| Avidreader212 chapter 9 . 6/28/2016
I like this Hiruzen. He is pretty bad ass.
| Loner Kid chapter 2 . 4/4/2016
I really like ur writing style
The flow of the story is good
Its easy to follow
That last bit was hilarious lol
Excuse me for writing short review
Im walking on the street right now
| Jatok chapter 9 . 4/3/2016
Hahahaha! This was hilarious, and good. Thanks for making my day!
| Axcel chapter 1 . 1/31/2016
Nice, Hiruzen! :D
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 9 . 1/20/2016
Very good work with Sarutobi here and his dialogue
Good switch up for Gaara's change
Hope for more!