|Reviews for And then suddenly, Ninjas!|
| Salome Maranya chapter 3 . 9/15
Sai is an adorable social dunderhead. Nice twist.
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 9 . 7/21
Nice, knowing Sarutobi from this universe, he gives Temari to Naruto and Sakura gets pisses to compete...he wins, COMPLETELY:-)
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/12
What's up with Naruto's glasses, or rather him having them? And why does he spend so much time adjusting them, almost seems like a nervous tick.
Sasuske - Sasuke
waft from Temari's body - waft from Tenten's body
| Ibskib chapter 8 . 7/12
A mangled sentence or two etc:
You rather took a chance than ran - You took a chance instead of running
that by with an idiot way - that with an idiotic way
attrention - attention
| Ibskib chapter 7 . 7/12
I really can't get used to Sakura calling Ino swine instead of pig, it seems much more insulting, and always feel like fighting words to me, much worse than Ino calling her forehead, creating a bit of cognitive dissonance.
| Avidreader212 chapter 9 . 6/28
I like this Hiruzen. He is pretty bad ass.
| Loner Kid chapter 2 . 4/4
I really like ur writing style
The flow of the story is good
Its easy to follow
That last bit was hilarious lol
Excuse me for writing short review
Im walking on the street right now
| Jatok chapter 9 . 4/3
Hahahaha! This was hilarious, and good. Thanks for making my day!
| Axcel chapter 1 . 1/31
Nice, Hiruzen! :D
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 9 . 1/20
Very good work with Sarutobi here and his dialogue
Good switch up for Gaara's change
Hope for more!
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 7 . 1/20
Good intro from Sarutobi on the purpose of the Chunin exams
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 5 . 1/20
Good work with Hinata and Dosu. LOL for all of the interaction with Sai, Hinata, and Ino, and Sakura wanting to win the exam
Good way to do the exam with Sasuke
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 3 . 1/20
:-D to Kakashi's first impression of Team 7
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 2 . 1/20
LOL for your description of Itachi in ANBU, and Naruto passing the test
| ants chapter 9 . 7/10/2015
when will u publish the sequel