Reviews for Belonging
Didrik chapter 16 . 7/15
yaoiyazzy chapter 22 . 5/28
I love this so much as soon as I saterted reading I couldn't stop and god I love u kyle u make me want to tighten my legs at ur words I hope u review extremely soon
saya chapter 14 . 4/3
That's mean *pouts* poor Cloud being raped repeatedly by that asshole, how could you?
P.S Just kidding*smiles* you're a good writer, but I still feel sorry for Cloud
JasonFTW chapter 22 . 12/18/2015
Omg you need to update, i read this chapter in one sitting, couldnt put it down! You better update soon, i know its been years but still, its too sexy, need to read more. I want Genesis to be alive and i want him to fuck Cloud, well I need him to fuck Cloud really. Please hurry up xx
Guest chapter 22 . 11/3/2015
I miss this fanfic TBH
Will you ever update again? I understand if you can't or don't want to though...
Guest chapter 22 . 11/2/2015
I'm starting to lose hope that you'll keep writing this story as it hasn't been updated for too long, but I'd really love to you to keep doing it, it's awesome T.T
dead-and-blue chapter 1 . 10/30/2015
I know this has nothing to do with the story, but are you gay? I don't mean this an offence, just a question. (damn! I love typing on computer)
heredia chapter 12 . 9/24/2015
i like it though on sephs and his brothers place i wouldnt be so gentle cause he caused too much of troubles them
lolwat chapter 22 . 9/20/2015
fucking love this fanfic oh my GOD I need to change my panties bc literally I am so goddamn wet after reading this whole story Jesus CHRIST
Lyumia chapter 22 . 9/17/2015
Okay, I officially love you and your story- it's so amazing, the plots great, and all the character portrayals are interesting, and the scenes! You little bundle of horrorshow, I don't even like rape fics, but I love this one! I know it hasn't been updated in like three years, but its still so enjoyable- even the authors notes are fun to read! Allow me to take this moment to wipe the blood gushing from my noe and say YOU ARE AMAZING DARLING ~
Guest chapter 22 . 8/3/2015
Gosh I know this is from 4 years ago but I'm only reading it now. I would so love to see this continued. And as for the point where Genesis doesn't remember Seph being so strong I was like "omg what if having swallowed so much of Clouds sperm made him stronger" or some shit and then I thought if Genesis wasn't dead Seph could have forced Clouds "part" into Genesis' unconscious mouth and accidentally healed him/made him stronger but Seph wouldn't understand what happened and... yeah. XD
Then I saw that this is the last chapter and it made me sad because this story still has soooo much potentiall. (TT—TT) *silently crieas*
Sorry I am responding with such a long comment on such an old piece of work. Life moves on and people change and get busy so I understand if you just never got back to it. Seriously though, I would love to read a continuation.
Shadow-Shuriken chapter 22 . 8/1/2015
Hello Mr Sexy!
It's been a while since you updated this story, and I think most of your (mostly) faithful readers are due for some more of your pervertedness. Also...can Genesis please be alive? I have a thing for red-heads...(except that one guy), and a cultured, gentlemanly pervert like him is right up my street. Also...I like angst, so can Cloud die at the end? Put him out of this misery...make him die from sheer stubborness, I mean, him being determined to die and just dying from sheer force of will? That sort of thing fascinates me as much as your endlessly perverted imagination.

Hmmm...I've never used pervert so many times in the same paragraph before, I'm running out of vocabulary.
Black Fox34 chapter 22 . 4/26/2015
I so love Belonging. This is the second time I've read it. But I'd love to know what happens. And wiether or not your male or female shouldn't matter, as long as you love writing what you enjoying writing. Though its mostly girls who love Yaoi stories I know several boys who also love reading Yaoi. So keep up the work. Will be looking for an update hopefully that is.
FionaAspenhallow2389 chapter 22 . 11/14/2014
How sick can you get. And you realise your awesome right keep being awesome.
FionaAspenhallow2389 chapter 12 . 11/14/2014
You should have been crueler and have him a cock ring aswell. Really good love your stories.
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