Reviews for It Smells Like Fire
crystalblue19 chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
Agh, this is just adorable, Wally is adorable and MayxWally is adorable. It just makes me sad that this pairing isn't as popular but I loved this! It was lovely and well written. c:
AllyisAmazed chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
. . . . . . . . (speechless because this is so kaiwaii and so full of wuv) . . . . . . . . . . . . oh my fuck, this is the most cutest fricking/saddest thing I have read in my life. And I've read some pretty sad things, just. wow. O_O
Ready to fly chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
I love this, I love your writing ;) I might be lurking on your profile haha
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
This was so sweet ; u ; I'm absolutely in love with the way you write. In places it was difficult to keep up with the pace, but the imagery you use is magical. This sounds really wishy-washy, but I totally love everything about this fic.
Plus, Wally deserves more love (and self-esteem!). I'm glad May's there to give it to him, even though I feel like perhaps Brendan should've been more established (?). I don't know. I'd like to see some more jealousy between him and Wally, even though Wally seemed to have pretty much given up on everything by this point. I'm glad May turned up to make things better. Believe in yourself, Wally! ;o;
Zino chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
Hngg, this was so cute! I've been wanting to read about Wally for a longest time and then I found this33 So I really liked this! Keep up the good work! :D
Meta-Akira chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
You have no idea how happy it made me to read this story.

Too many stories about Wally end tragically, so I'm glad that there was a happy(ish) ending to this one!
Capital WHY chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
:3 I love Newrivalshipping. :)

I think you might want to proofread this one more time, I noticed some typos but I forget where they are by now . . . ;;

The fic had a nice feel to it, and everything worked, but something about the flow seemed a bit . . . off to me. For the life of me I don't know what it is. Maybe because it feels sort of . . . oh, I dunno. Not choppy. It was like something was missing. Nothing big though! Besides that, I really liked it. Newrivalshipping is one of my favorite ships. :D

So, to sum all that up: good job.

Finessefully,.

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