|Reviews for Mala in Se|
| Smithback chapter 16 . 2/19
an excellent story
| Applestop chapter 16 . 2/12
That was pretty cute! Thanks for the fun ride! :D
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/6
Vegeta, professional Privet Investigator! Works until the case is solved! Or he gets hungry... Or Kakorott wants to spar... Or the Woman complains that he needs to spend more time with the brat... Or he gets board...
| Applestop chapter 7 . 2/5
*cries* They didn't wear silly costumes. YOUR STORY IS DEAD TO ME! Hahah, just kidding. I want to see Vegita's idea of "helping".
| Applestop chapter 6 . 2/5
If Chichi, Goku, and Goten don't show up in stupid costumes to protect their identity, I will be very, very sad.
| TheGodfather93 chapter 16 . 11/30/2011
Great story. Loved the part where Vegeta and Piccolo teamed up to investigate the murder.
| SierraLarson chapter 16 . 7/26/2011
I loved this story! I can't really describe why, but one of the reasons is for the cute Gh/Vi scenes. X3
| SierraLarson chapter 14 . 7/26/2011
T-T I loved the ending to this chapter...
| Lolchen chapter 16 . 9/24/2010
I enjoyed reading this very much, though the trap in the end was kinda... overdone? And the baddie was long since with the police before they were rescued... I wouldn't call it anticlimatic (it was anything but), however, you stretched the story there a bit too much for my liking. The rest though is loveable! I like the idea, and how Gohan went along to jail because of his morales... and then almost went crazy thanks to his experiences. Seems very likely to me, and you did a good job writing it. Oh, and you did fabulous foreshadowing in the first two chapters, without letting the reader now that it was necessary parts for the rest of the story! Wonderful work. *faves*
Now, onto reading its sequels...
| Onba chapter 16 . 8/3/2010
Good story, I enjoyed it very much.
| UltimateGohan42 chapter 16 . 3/15/2010
probably one of the best stories ive read, good job
| Itachi's aprentice chapter 16 . 12/14/2009
| Itachi's aprentice chapter 15 . 12/14/2009
All were silent for a beat as the gazed at the tool Bulma held out. Chi Chi’s cheek twitched before she stated very flatly, “You intend to rescue my son with a turkey carver.”
That Chi-chi for ya. Great work.
| Itachi's aprentice chapter 14 . 12/14/2009
Holy crap! It can't end like this. Great work.
| Itachi's aprentice chapter 13 . 12/14/2009
Piccolo Kick ASS Great work.