Reviews for Women In Love
PolarBear chapter 20 . 3/4
Glad to see you've picked this up again. It sat at 17 chapters for so long I'd stopped checking back as frequently and today I finally check and find three new chapters I hadn't read. Yay!

Looking forward to more. I love these two.
Guest chapter 20 . 1/2

Not much to say this time, but I do appreciate this look into Mari's personal concerns, as well as how her day to day life works.

Her career concerns in particular are a nice extension of the coming of age themes from the manga.

And as always, the meeting with her father looms...

Warm regards,

Liber-T.E.A chapter 20 . 1/4
Nice chappie!
just2think chapter 18 . 12/31/2014
did u delete chap 20-contemplation?
coz i got reminder in my mail, but when i open, can't found it...
n i using this chap to ask u about that...
thank for ur time...
Major Mike Powell III chapter 19 . 12/30/2014
Well, well, soldier...

(Whistles) Well, I'll be damned! You're finally back, my friend, and back in full force. That's great, yes! :3

This new chapter here was quite interesting, pretty cute and funny, particularly thanks to Akko's mad editing skillz. Those little "corrections" were pretty funny. LOL Clever girl.

Also, I like the "clip show" style of these latest 2 chapters. Takin' a stroll down Memory Lane is nice every now and then, yesh. :3

And also, the ending here was pretty sweet. *A* Mama Oohashi showing Akko some motherly love and thinking of how Mari made Akko stronger, clearly showing signs of approval for Mari...that was very sweet and adorable. *W* She may be absent quite often, but still, Mama Oohashi is a good mother. :3

Great work, my friend! Keep it up!
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Liber-T.E.A chapter 19 . 12/22/2014
venturaaa chapter 19 . 12/19/2014
Soooo good! I spent the past three days flying through these chapters, amazing! I can't wait for chapter 20!
Hagane no Hana chapter 19 . 12/16/2014
Thank you very much for continuing this story. You capture the spirit of the manga but seamlessly add your own style. It's extremely convincing as a continuation to the story. Looking forward to the next update!
just2think chapter 19 . 12/16/2014
Akko's sweet...
i'm waiting for their meeting...
wonder what they'll discuss bout their daughter and Mari's father reaction... much thing wondering in my mind...
pls update soon...tq
Hinata-Snow the First chapter 19 . 12/16/2014
Hello, Ethereal Forest! Welcome back!

These last two chapters have been interesting. They are they rough equivalent of a "clip show" recapping the original manga. And yet, it feels fresh and new thanks to Akko's *ahem* editing. The appearance of Akko's mom at the end of this chapter is much appreciated as well.
Unfortunately, no Mari-san in this chapter, but ah well.

Thank you for still writing this! I'm very grateful to you.

Warm Regards,

gameipedia chapter 19 . 12/16/2014
Forgot this existed until now, I'm now very hyped
Kittys-yay chapter 19 . 12/16/2014
Glad to see you've returned. Fantastic chapter, can't wait to see what happens next .u.
TheVictoriousMC chapter 18 . 10/13/2014
Please tell me that this story isn't on hiatus!
I love your Mariko :(
MissMitsuki chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
Hey xxWfCPxx do you still write anymore? BTW good story
nyannya chapter 18 . 6/11/2014
hey there, im a akko x mari couple lover!
i do think you are making a great work with your story, and since i have no idea if you will update new chapters, could you text me if you have the continuation?

thank you so much for sharing such a nice story :))
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