Reviews for Women In Love
Major Mike Powell III chapter 20 . 5/15
Well, well, soldier...

Ok, first off: I have no excuse for neglecting my reading and reviewing duties on this story. I'm simply the worst. I'm sorry. OTL

Still, this new chapter here, hm, it was nice, yes. Simply put: The title of this chapter says it all, and it is quite fitting, given that the spotlight here is all on Mari, and we all know: Mari is *so* totally the contemplative type. XD

It's just one of the many reasons we all adore her and why she and Akko are SO perfect together. *O*

Also, Papa Kumakura...damn it. He's still very much the proverbial "X Factor" of the main arc of this story, for sure.

Still, that final interaction via text messages between Akko and Mari was very nice, a lovely reminder that these two lovebirds are still the stars, together. X3

Nice work, my friend!
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
PolarBear chapter 20 . 3/4
Glad to see you've picked this up again. It sat at 17 chapters for so long I'd stopped checking back as frequently and today I finally check and find three new chapters I hadn't read. Yay!

Looking forward to more. I love these two.
Guest chapter 20 . 1/2

Not much to say this time, but I do appreciate this look into Mari's personal concerns, as well as how her day to day life works.

Her career concerns in particular are a nice extension of the coming of age themes from the manga.

And as always, the meeting with her father looms...

Warm regards,

Liber-T.E.A chapter 20 . 1/4
Nice chappie!
just2think chapter 18 . 12/31/2014
did u delete chap 20-contemplation?
coz i got reminder in my mail, but when i open, can't found it...
n i using this chap to ask u about that...
thank for ur time...
Major Mike Powell III chapter 19 . 12/30/2014
Well, well, soldier...

(Whistles) Well, I'll be damned! You're finally back, my friend, and back in full force. That's great, yes! :3

This new chapter here was quite interesting, pretty cute and funny, particularly thanks to Akko's mad editing skillz. Those little "corrections" were pretty funny. LOL Clever girl.

Also, I like the "clip show" style of these latest 2 chapters. Takin' a stroll down Memory Lane is nice every now and then, yesh. :3

And also, the ending here was pretty sweet. *A* Mama Oohashi showing Akko some motherly love and thinking of how Mari made Akko stronger, clearly showing signs of approval for Mari...that was very sweet and adorable. *W* She may be absent quite often, but still, Mama Oohashi is a good mother. :3

Great work, my friend! Keep it up!
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Liber-T.E.A chapter 19 . 12/22/2014
venturaaa chapter 19 . 12/19/2014
Soooo good! I spent the past three days flying through these chapters, amazing! I can't wait for chapter 20!
Hagane no Hana chapter 19 . 12/16/2014
Thank you very much for continuing this story. You capture the spirit of the manga but seamlessly add your own style. It's extremely convincing as a continuation to the story. Looking forward to the next update!
just2think chapter 19 . 12/16/2014
Akko's sweet...
i'm waiting for their meeting...
wonder what they'll discuss bout their daughter and Mari's father reaction... much thing wondering in my mind...
pls update soon...tq
Hinata-Snow the First chapter 19 . 12/16/2014
Hello, Ethereal Forest! Welcome back!

These last two chapters have been interesting. They are they rough equivalent of a "clip show" recapping the original manga. And yet, it feels fresh and new thanks to Akko's *ahem* editing. The appearance of Akko's mom at the end of this chapter is much appreciated as well.
Unfortunately, no Mari-san in this chapter, but ah well.

Thank you for still writing this! I'm very grateful to you.

Warm Regards,

gameipedia chapter 19 . 12/16/2014
Forgot this existed until now, I'm now very hyped
Kittys-yay chapter 19 . 12/16/2014
Glad to see you've returned. Fantastic chapter, can't wait to see what happens next .u.
TheVictoriousMC chapter 18 . 10/13/2014
Please tell me that this story isn't on hiatus!
I love your Mariko :(
MissMitsuki chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
Hey xxWfCPxx do you still write anymore? BTW good story
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