|Reviews for Four Square and None so Charming|
| hoaluver429 chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
This is really good. Please continue:]
| damon chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
I can't beleive it's so short . I liked it anyway.
| Mindful Demon chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
So far it's good. There's only one little grammatical error that I'd like to point out, in the first sentence, when you said 'sometimes Fabian gets under her skin at times" Saying 'sometimes' at the beginning of a sentence then saying 'at times' is like saying sometimes twice. You've just got to pick one of the two and stick with it. D
Other than that, it was good. Although I'd just like to give you a hint when it comes to getting reviews:
If your story has even the slightest hints of Fabian/Nina in it, you should fill in the characters section with "Fabian R. & Nina M.". Even if it's not the main pairing, or if the plot is evenly divided between two pairings, that tiny change will still bring all the Fabina shippers (and reviewers) flocking to your story. ;)
| Rose chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
This is an interesting story! The last lines are effective!
| samcabral chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
i love this chap well writen... but its weird to think patrica likes fabian... now that i think avout it its prett. funny :D