Reviews for A Case of the Flu
Shadowhunterlover 00 chapter 1 . 7/11
Debbie Hicks chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
Chapter 2.
then suddenly my flu was abnormal my tape of my own teeth suddenly my own eyes were Deatly Red I was not well very sick it was Eever suddenly my own Vocal cords suddenly went thinnest but suddenly too one darnest look and sighted him but his sister them myself had a hugest problem controlling myself and hated lights Hissed very really too vicious and growling like a Vampire sighted my wild bed head hair gone Extremely pale in the face Flaring my fangs oh my GOD Bella you are out of orbit I am sick but infected I am a Resurrected corpse but I want blood myself was ill but infected had shadows under my own eyes my skin was dead pale sparking into crystals like diamonds your skin is cold you are a walking but sick what Nocturne haunts thine the living a vampire travels native soil of Romania my mother land she is recoding for a play is trained it's your bite connecting her to you she is your mate the newspapers reported a very sick but infected person entered the home via bodysuit ended up hungry and ill haunted like a real vampire but very sick had a serious disease hunted interorganic animals was still undead like a wild hungriest beast hissing at humans fled of myself Wild but tamed had to go on and was still on the move and walking in my clothes of the targets killed oh my god you suddenly hunting and wearing the killed target clothes from your bodysuit on foot to save gas it's my flu it is transforming me into a Creature of the night known as a Vampire hunted like some Wild Vampire oh no she been what turned on a night the newspaper reported a very infected but had a disease but Wild Vampire sick but hungry again hunted for Animals had blood red eyes and a thirst for blood on my mouth looked about in my late teens was Eighteen years just turned only Eighteen by his punishment had not slept studied very late without sleep at all it was a lot of rumors were so fierce caused disquiet a lot of noises then all of the sudden myself had to get better I'm doomed to blazed in fire ugh you are very sick she is trained but taught then all of the sudden my throat burns in heat it is not saliva venom it is guarding you there goes my undead life
then the noise roared I smelt it using my nose had to back away what is that scent Werewolves I knew these Pack on patrol I clear my throat INUYASHA SIT YOU MONGRELS! Crashed to people in clothes and shoe watch it Bella you gone wild watch it she is very sick she turned us by her infctious bite swirled some form of water it is bee venom from her mouth it acts as a protection came to us sick in the head had to bite instead of blood what is called it is known as Venom from real vampire bats vampire venom oh my god she is really gone for Volturi heard horrid news are furious but enjoyed the person is gifted her mind is a Shield we are in trouble repected the law but honored it proudly it was a great my stomach Burp ate I feel strong mess with me whooa I was weak in the knees I must hunt Again it is my new supply of blood ugh I look wild.
Harmony chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
Cute story...I think a little more story wouldn't have hurt though
Chloe chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
I really enjoyed it. Its the best I have read in terms of the description and language. You have worded it very well. It could be the real thing!
Linneagb chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
I want cookies and milk, I WANT COOKIES AND MILK, haha, Great story.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
aawwwwww they are so cute
ChosenByBlood chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Ahhhhh! this is amazing:) x please write more
dorsa20 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
i loved it so much ...edward id just so sweet ! )
JerinAnn6397 chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
lol i love it! keep on writing! I love this story. I think a sequel would be amazing. PM me if you decide to make a sequel 'cuz i would read it in a heartbeat. :D
PoppyMay chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
cute story! Love the EB fluff. Thanks for writing : )
gemma loves edward chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
I loved this story thank you for writing it love gem
madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Why was she in hospital again? Talk about a worry wart! That was sweet, nicely done!
CloudlessSummerSkies chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Awww, very sweet! ;)
Team-Edward-Forever95 chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
love that ending 3
jeangary28 chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
loved the story really sweet and cute