I'm a sobbing mess right now omg

Beautiful, thank you for sharing. I'm glad your story was a happy one.

Oh my goodness I'm a sobbing mess right now. So sad, but so beautiful.

This was a painful one

It is a great story. I cried a lot while reading it, it's so sad . I loved that Edward accepted Seth as part of Bella's life. Phenomenal ending...

This is really great! :)

I absolutely love this story. I am a mom and I was in tears as soon as I realised "Seth" was your son. I know I would never be able to relate but this story really touched a good art of me. Than you X

O mi dios!

Incredibly sad that Bella experienced such pain and tragedy. Thank goodness Edward came by when he did to help Bella learn to heal. Having gallstones whether pregnant or not is a killer but the added stress, pain and all round irritation makes for being pregnant with gallstones unbearable some days (so glad that's over now lol). My heart aches for anyone that has experienced losing a child born or not. I wish them lots of love and positive thoughts!

Ms Torres
x

Gahhhhh. Was thinking he was her son then I talked myself out of it. Good story.

Aw, sweet ending!

i read this and this was so f-sad and i think that it would have been awesome if you wrote this as a complete story(:

truly loved it!

Such an amazing story, brilliantly written. And with such a twist. Fantastic story, really loved it. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to reading more of your work

That was so sad and beautiful. Poor Bella lost so much. Amazing story :)

Great story and Edward's letter at the end is beautiful.

Oh goodness, I'm crying a lot now. :D This was very good, I really enjoyed it. What a sad story for Bella. I wondered if Seth was her son, so I was really excited to see that. :) And Edward's letter at the end...so good. Ugh, what a good man he is in this. :)

Thank you for writing this. It's so lovely, you did great. :)