Reviews for I Hold Dark Force
Vicious Pink chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Well, I have to say the whole bit in the game about Orakio's sword holding Dark Force at bay for the last 1,000 years and the contradiction of *needing* the sword to *beat* Dark Force is both silly and a bad piece of script writing. However, you do the scene in the game justice in this story. I came into your story spoiled, since I've played the game many times, so the dramatic ending was, unfortunately, also spoiled for me. However, if someone knew nothing of the game and read this, they'd be dying to read the next chapter at this point! Good job; looking forward to more of your Adan timeline stories.

Oh, and excellent job on Wren here. I think it's really fitting.