|Reviews for Open windows|
| Darkness Incarnated chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
This was a really good first chapter, I enjoyed it emensly! Please update as soon as possible.
| BloodRoseAngelReba chapter 1 . 4/26/2011
This is really good, I love your descriptions. The pace is quite quick between the introduction and the action, however, so maybe you could slow it down a little to give the characters time to develop and let us get to know them, since they're your OCs and we don't know them already. The fast pace works well in the battle scene, however, especially how suddenly Storm is killed; it really takes the reader by surprise. I also like the description of her weapon form and 'ebony as her eyes'. It's really good, keep it up! :D